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Gideon Smith
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Not exactly sure how this works? I have a 4600 word soft sci-fi story. Looking for critiques or exchange of similar length sci-fi or fantasy. Or anyone that wants to look at the first 450?

thanks anyone ? 

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Posted : May 15, 2023 9:54 am
Wahlquistj
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Happy to take a look at yours— mine is a bit longer, 7,300 words, but if you don’t have the bandwidth for it that’s okay. 

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Posted : May 15, 2023 5:19 pm
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Gideon Smith
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@wahlquistj Awesome! Totally happy to exchange ?  7.3k is totally similar length

(I guess I should have clarified by 'similar' I just meant under 10k, and the truth is, I'm happy to even look at over 10k, its just I don't really write pieces that long, so I may not be the best at critiquing in that length range)

"...your motivations for wanting to write are probably complex. You may have a few great passions, you may want to be rich and famous, and you may need therapy."
- Dave Farland, Million Dollar Outlines

Writers of the Future:
2025 Q1: P Q2: WIP Q3: TBD Q4: TBD
2024 Q1: F Q2: HM Q3:SHM Q4: SHM
2023 Q1: RWC Q2: SHM Q3: SHM Q4: R
2022 Q4: R
Submissions to other markets:
2024: 45 submitted 8 acceptances
2023: 74 submitted 13 acceptances
2022: 22 submitted 1 acceptance

http://www.gideonpsmith.com

 
Posted : May 15, 2023 5:57 pm
Saint Rupert
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I don't have anything to exchange at the moment, but I'd be happy to give it a read if you want to PM it to me.

 
Posted : May 15, 2023 8:53 pm
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Gideon Smith
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@bzelger Great, I will do, thank you!

"...your motivations for wanting to write are probably complex. You may have a few great passions, you may want to be rich and famous, and you may need therapy."
- Dave Farland, Million Dollar Outlines

Writers of the Future:
2025 Q1: P Q2: WIP Q3: TBD Q4: TBD
2024 Q1: F Q2: HM Q3:SHM Q4: SHM
2023 Q1: RWC Q2: SHM Q3: SHM Q4: R
2022 Q4: R
Submissions to other markets:
2024: 45 submitted 8 acceptances
2023: 74 submitted 13 acceptances
2022: 22 submitted 1 acceptance

http://www.gideonpsmith.com

 
Posted : May 16, 2023 7:29 am
Cherrie
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@gideonpsmith I’d be happy to do the first 450 for you today. If you need more full critiques I can take the whole thing, but It’ll take me a bit longer.

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Posted : May 16, 2023 8:55 am
Gideon Smith
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@clfors Thank you! Will PM the 450 now ?

"...your motivations for wanting to write are probably complex. You may have a few great passions, you may want to be rich and famous, and you may need therapy."
- Dave Farland, Million Dollar Outlines

Writers of the Future:
2025 Q1: P Q2: WIP Q3: TBD Q4: TBD
2024 Q1: F Q2: HM Q3:SHM Q4: SHM
2023 Q1: RWC Q2: SHM Q3: SHM Q4: R
2022 Q4: R
Submissions to other markets:
2024: 45 submitted 8 acceptances
2023: 74 submitted 13 acceptances
2022: 22 submitted 1 acceptance

http://www.gideonpsmith.com

 
Posted : May 16, 2023 9:15 am
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