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Physa/ Guthington/ Amy
(@physa)
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I have a decent draft of a story that could be my Q2 entry. Is there anyone up for a crit exchange and/or critique? Thanks in advance...

WOTF results:
Vol 41: Q1 HM, Q2 HM, Q4 P
running totals to date:
WOTF: 6 Rs, 3 RWCs. 7 HMs
IOTF: 4 Rs, 3 HMs
Check out my new website: https://www.amyrwethingtonwriterofspeculativeworlds.com/
According to Winston Churchill, "success is going from failure to failure with enthusiasm"
Somehow I lost my Guthington profile, but it's me. Amy Wethington = Guthington = Physa

 
Posted : February 17, 2023 6:36 am
Dustin Adams
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I can have a look. [email protected]

Career: 1x Win -- 2x NW-F -- 2x S-F -- 9x S-HM -- 11x HM -- 7x R
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Posted : February 17, 2023 6:38 am
Physa/ Guthington/ Amy
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Posted by: @tj_knight

I can have a look. [email protected]

Wow! Thanks Dustin. Just sent it to your email address. -Amy

 

WOTF results:
Vol 41: Q1 HM, Q2 HM, Q4 P
running totals to date:
WOTF: 6 Rs, 3 RWCs. 7 HMs
IOTF: 4 Rs, 3 HMs
Check out my new website: https://www.amyrwethingtonwriterofspeculativeworlds.com/
According to Winston Churchill, "success is going from failure to failure with enthusiasm"
Somehow I lost my Guthington profile, but it's me. Amy Wethington = Guthington = Physa

 
Posted : February 17, 2023 7:22 am
Adrian
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Hi Amy. I can take a look as well, although mine might not be ready for a little longer, as I want to tackle some revisions ideas already received. Smile

F x1
SHM x3
HM x10
RWC x1
R Dozens

 
Posted : February 17, 2023 5:54 pm
Physa/ Guthington/ Amy
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Posts: 423
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Posted by: @adrian

Hi Amy. I can take a look as well, although mine might not be ready for a little longer, as I want to tackle some revisions ideas already received. Smile

Wow Adrian! Thanks so much! And I'll be ready to read yours when it is ready. I'll DM you the story. Thanks again, Amy

 

WOTF results:
Vol 41: Q1 HM, Q2 HM, Q4 P
running totals to date:
WOTF: 6 Rs, 3 RWCs. 7 HMs
IOTF: 4 Rs, 3 HMs
Check out my new website: https://www.amyrwethingtonwriterofspeculativeworlds.com/
According to Winston Churchill, "success is going from failure to failure with enthusiasm"
Somehow I lost my Guthington profile, but it's me. Amy Wethington = Guthington = Physa

 
Posted : February 18, 2023 6:38 am
(@petelead)
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Happy to take a look! I have a ~3,800 word fantasy I'd love feedback on as well if you'd like to exchange.

 
Posted : February 19, 2023 3:37 pm
Physa/ Guthington/ Amy
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Posts: 423
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Posted by: @petelead

Happy to take a look! I have a ~3,800 word fantasy I'd love feedback on as well if you'd like to exchange.

Sounds great! Will DM you shortly. Thanks so much, Amy

 

WOTF results:
Vol 41: Q1 HM, Q2 HM, Q4 P
running totals to date:
WOTF: 6 Rs, 3 RWCs. 7 HMs
IOTF: 4 Rs, 3 HMs
Check out my new website: https://www.amyrwethingtonwriterofspeculativeworlds.com/
According to Winston Churchill, "success is going from failure to failure with enthusiasm"
Somehow I lost my Guthington profile, but it's me. Amy Wethington = Guthington = Physa

 
Posted : February 19, 2023 5:06 pm
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Joel C. Scoberg
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Hi Amy, are you still after another pair of eyes on your story? I'd be happy to take a look. I will DM you.

3rd Place Q3 Vol 41
Submission history: R x 2 / HM x 7 / SHM x 2
Stories published in Daily Science Fiction, Every Day Fiction, 365tomorrows, and Gwyllion Magazine.

 
Posted : March 9, 2023 4:49 am
Physa/ Guthington/ Amy
(@physa)
Posts: 423
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Posted by: @joel-c-scoberg

Hi Amy, are you still after another pair of eyes on your story? I'd be happy to take a look. I will DM you.

Thanks so much for the offer! I just submitted it yesterday, though. So... perhaps my Q3 when it's ready? Just responded to your DM.

 

WOTF results:
Vol 41: Q1 HM, Q2 HM, Q4 P
running totals to date:
WOTF: 6 Rs, 3 RWCs. 7 HMs
IOTF: 4 Rs, 3 HMs
Check out my new website: https://www.amyrwethingtonwriterofspeculativeworlds.com/
According to Winston Churchill, "success is going from failure to failure with enthusiasm"
Somehow I lost my Guthington profile, but it's me. Amy Wethington = Guthington = Physa

 
Posted : March 9, 2023 6:46 am
V. R. Lassmann
(@vrlass)
Posts: 77
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Wanna swap it for 3k psychological horror?

 
Posted : March 19, 2023 5:45 pm
Physa/ Guthington/ Amy
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Posts: 423
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Posted by: @vrlass

Wanna swap it for 3k psychological horror?

I've already submitted my story. Will give yours a look if you like. Send me a PM if you'd like another set of eyes along with where you are aiming it and what sort of feedback you are looking for. Smile Amy

 

WOTF results:
Vol 41: Q1 HM, Q2 HM, Q4 P
running totals to date:
WOTF: 6 Rs, 3 RWCs. 7 HMs
IOTF: 4 Rs, 3 HMs
Check out my new website: https://www.amyrwethingtonwriterofspeculativeworlds.com/
According to Winston Churchill, "success is going from failure to failure with enthusiasm"
Somehow I lost my Guthington profile, but it's me. Amy Wethington = Guthington = Physa

 
Posted : March 21, 2023 5:55 am
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