If you've got something ready for a look and have time, shoot me a note. I've taken three scenes from my novel, stitched them together, and tried to insert a throughline and cast it from 3rd to 1st. Would love some opinions if it works or not.
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I can have a look!
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That's not too long- I probably could be available to have a look-through. If you wanted to do an exchange, I have a short sci-fi piece of a few hundred words less.
I'm happy to exchange. I have a story about 3k words long, and I would appreciate it if a native speaker could take a look at it, as I am not one myself.
I'll take a look if you'd like another swap. I've got a 16kish work that needs some extra eyes. Doesn't have to be the whole thing, of course. Good luck with the project either way 