Have a 5300 worder that hit SHM couple quarters back. Tweaked a bit now, and I would love experienced eyes on to see if there are still show-stoppers.
Thanks.
HMx9
SHMx1 (Q2'22)
2xCritiquer for Published Winners (Oh yeah, it's now a thing)
I'd be happy to swap stories if you're okay with getting my critique back next weekend or the beginning of next week. My story is a 5400 word fantasy w/ faint flavors of sci fi.
DM me if you're game.
Website: https://www.jeschleicher.com/
Blog: https://www.jeschleicher.com/dopaminesdelight
V40: Q1 3rd Place Winner ("Squiddy")
V39: SHM, HM, HM, HM
V38: HM, SHM, HM, HM
V37: R, R, HM, HM
V36: R
Congrats on the SHM! Have I read this one before? I'll take a look either way, though I am behind on a few critiques. Feel free to message.
“Stories are the collective wisdom of everyone who has ever lived. Your job as a storyteller is not simply to entertain. Nor is it to be noticed for the way your turn a phrase. You have a very important job—one of the most important. Your job is to let people know that everyone shares their feelings—and that these feelings bind us. Your job is a healing art, and like all healers, you have a responsibility. Let people know they are not alone. You must make people understand that we are all the same.”
Brian McDonald
2022: Second Place Winner V39 Q1
2021: HM, HM, SHM
2020: R
2019: SHM, R
2018: HM
2017: HM
Check out my fiction and more at spencersekulin.net
Happy to swap if you're still looking. 
F x1
SHM x4
HM x11
RWC x1
R Dozens
If you're still looking I have a 3900-word sci-fi story that's ready.
V38: HM, R, R, HM
V39: RWC, HM, RWC, HM
V40: RWC, HM, SHM, R
V41: R, RWC, R, R
V42: RWC, WIP, WIP
