I have a story with a female protagonist that is finally nearing a finished state. This has been on the go a very long time and Karen (Rylander) was kind enough to take a look at it for me way back in November when it was much shorter and as usual started in the wrong place.
My Q2 featured my first female protagonist. It crashed and burned despite my thinking that the story was very strong.
I should particularly appreciate it if one or more of our female colleagues would be willing to take a look at my Q3 and let me know if, in my ignorance, I have made serious errors of characterisation.
As usual I shall be happy to exchange crits. Length no real problem. Mine will be somewhere between 5 and 6K.
1 x SF, 2 x SHM, 11 x HM, WotF batting average .583
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Hi Ishmael,
I'll have a look. 
I have the beginning of a fantasy story that also has a female protagonist that I'm writing for a non-WotF contest, but I'd like a male to look at it to see if it will hook a male audience. I'll PM you my email, so you can send the story if you haven't to someone else already.
Thanks,
chuuluu
