Having just received my semi-finalist critique, the feedback Dave gave me makes me want a few more eyes on this story before I submit to the next market - IGMS first. If there are any takers, PM or email me.
I'd be happy to critique anything that is somewhat similar in size, give or take a couple thousand.
Thanks!
Vol 29 Q3 Semi Finalist
Send it along. I'll be happy to read it.
Thomas K Carpenter
SFx2, SHMx1, HMx12 (Pro'd Out - Q4 2016)
EQMM - Feb 2015 /
I was hoping you'd say that. 
I'm working on your story, BTW. I think I can get it to you by tomorrow.
Vol 29 Q3 Semi Finalist
Sent it back to you last week. Hope you got it. If not, let me know, I'll resend.
Thomas K Carpenter
SFx2, SHMx1, HMx12 (Pro'd Out - Q4 2016)
EQMM - Feb 2015 /
Sent it back to you last week. Hope you got it. If not, let me know, I'll resend.
Let me know if I need to resend, too.
Jeanette Gonzalez
HM x4, SHM x2, F x1
If you need another, PM or email it to me 
Very sporadic submitter but 9 HMs: latest Q1 2021
Author of Gateway Through Time: Available at https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1112672
If you need another, PM or email it to me
Same.
