This will be my Q1 entry, and I'd appreciate a full critique with a contest-specific eye.
Glad to return the favour on similarly-sized stories (more or less--willing to go above that count if necessary). 
(If you're not up to the full 4000, check the last entry in the 450 thread.)
Stewart C Baker - 1st place, Q2 V32
My contest history: Semi-finalist, R, HM, R, R, HM, HM, R, R, R, R, HM, R, R, R, R, Winner
This will be my Q1 entry, and I'd appreciate a full critique with a contest-specific eye.
Glad to return the favour on similarly-sized stories (more or less--willing to go above that count if necessary).
(If you're not up to the full 4000, check the last entry in the 450 thread.)
I owe you, Stewart, and I'd love to read it. You have my email. 
Jeanette Gonzalez
HM x4, SHM x2, F x1
Show me yours, and I'll show you mine.
Career: 1x Win -- 2x NW-F -- 2x S-F -- 9x S-HM -- 11x HM -- 7x R
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Not sure how contest-specific my eye is in the Age of Dave, but I could take a look.
http://nineandsixtyways.com/
Tools, Not Rules.
Martin L. Shoemaker
3rd Place Q1 V31
"Today I Am Paul", WSFA Small Press Award 2015, Nebula nomination 2015
Today I Am Carey from Baen
The Last Dance (#1 science fiction eBook on Amazon, October 2019) and The Last Campaign from 47North
I'm pretty sure I owe you more than one, too, so send it my way!
Oi! What happened to sending me another copy that Word will accept?
Vol 29 Q3 Semi Finalist
Oi! What happened to sending me another copy that Word will accept?
My brain, it is a sieve... 
Thanks for all your offers--and those of you who PMed, as well.
I'll send this out tomorrow at work. On "sick leave" for family reasons today, and limited computer access is in the process of ensuing.
Stewart C Baker - 1st place, Q2 V32
My contest history: Semi-finalist, R, HM, R, R, HM, HM, R, R, R, R, HM, R, R, R, R, Winner
