Hi guys, I have already submitted this story due to deadline, but I think it could use some more love, but I am not really sure where.
Any1?
Not a genre that I'm familiar with, but I'd be happy to offer my opinions if you want to PM it to me.
Hey there! I'd be happy to take a look.
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