I wrote one for a different contest as the title says. It could use a check over. I hope it's one of my better written story but... Anyway, I would appreciate any help. I would do one for anyone who reads this story-hopefully I can make a bunch of suggestions to help yours. A bit over 4,000 words.
Working on turning Lead into Gold.
Four HMs From WotF
The latest was Q1'12
HM-quarter 4 Volume 32
One HM for another contest
published in Strange New Worlds Ten.
Another HM http://onthepremises.com/minis/mini_18.html
I'll PM you my e-mail address. I'll have a story of similar length ready in a week or so if that sounds good. I don't intend to submit it to WotF either, but it will be my backup for this quarter.
35: - R R R | 36: R HM R R | 37: HM HM HM SHM | 38: HM HM HM HM | 39: HM HM HM SHM | 40: HM R SHM SHM | 41: R HM SHM R
5 SHM / 13 HM / 9 R
Sounds good
Working on turning Lead into Gold.
Four HMs From WotF
The latest was Q1'12
HM-quarter 4 Volume 32
One HM for another contest
published in Strange New Worlds Ten.
Another HM http://onthepremises.com/minis/mini_18.html
Okay This story is off. I am not sure how long it will be to get a response. A day-three weeks? If anyone that reads this has been here awhile you may remember that I have said that only one editor has liked my work-to any degree beyond a HM that is-but he isn't buying. Well he is buying. I now have a chance to see if I have been correct or not. Hmmm...
Working on turning Lead into Gold.
Four HMs From WotF
The latest was Q1'12
HM-quarter 4 Volume 32
One HM for another contest
published in Strange New Worlds Ten.
Another HM http://onthepremises.com/minis/mini_18.html
I figured I might as well put this into a preexisting thread, so here goes...
Anyone interested in reading and telling me what they think of a bizarre, half allegory-like 3.5k story? Like I said, it's pretty weird and I don't think it's fit for WotF because of its very minimal speculative premise, among other reasons; but I do want to know if it's any good. And no telling me it's weird, I know that already, and no telling me I have a twisted mind, either, cuz I know that already too. 
I'm also willing to critique anyone else's story as well, regardless whether you want to read mine or not. (What, not want to read it? Impossible? 
)
Success is going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm ~ Winston Churchill
V37: R, R, R, HM
V38: SHM
