I have started a story based upon a rather specialist area of knowledge (of which I expect the average reader to be utterly and quite justifiably ignorant) and I am unsure whether the amount of background that I've supplied is inadequate, excessive or possibly quite unintelligible.
As usual with me I have only a vague outline of the story in my head, but it would be extremely helpful to know whether what I have written so far makes any sort of sense.
If anyone would care to take a look at it, I should be happy to offer a crit in exchange on a full or part story. Any brave volunteers please PM me.
1 x SF, 2 x SHM, 11 x HM, WotF batting average .583
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Hi Ishmael –
I tried to send this to you via PM, but it didn't appear to send. just got stuck in my outbox. anyway....
Sure, I’d be happy to take a look for you. Please feel free to email me directly to [email protected]
In exchange, would you mind having a look over the first chapter of my current story? It is 2400.
Kind Regards
Christopher Henckel
WOTF Stats
(2014) V31 – R
(2018) V35 – HM
(2019) V36 – HM, SHM
(2020) V37 – R, HM, SHM, Finalist
(2021) V38 – SF, SHM, SHM, HM
(2022) V39 – HM, SHM, SHM, SHM
(2023) V40 - HM, SF, tba, tba
