Well, there's about three weeks left until the end of the quarter, and I've finally got my story in a place where I'm willing to swap for crits. It's currently sitting at 5700 words. If you're interested in a trade, feel free to PM me.
If you are in difficulties with a book, try the element of surprise: attack it at an hour when it isn't expecting it. ~ H.G. Wells
If a person offend you, and you are in doubt as to whether it was intentional or not, do not resort to extreme measures; simply watch your chance and hit him with a brick. ~ Mark Twain
R, SF, SHM, SHM, SHM, F, R, HM, SHM, R, HM, R, F, SHM, SHM, SHM, SF, SHM, 1st Place (Q2 V38)
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I've PM'd you.
You've been PM'd.
I'll PM you. Anyone else interested in a swap, PM me. I have 4K ready to go.
Accomplishments:
SF: V32Q2, V28Q4
HM: V29 Q2, V30 Q2
Dave Farland: Short Story Master's Class, World Building
Viable Paradise XVI
Uncle Orson's 2011
"Stalkworthy"
http://www.francisbruno.com
I'll PM you. Anyone else interested in a swap, PM me. I have 4K ready to go.
We're into Q2 at this point, and I don't have anything to swap quite at the moment, but I'll be willing to trade with you once the piece I'm working on has a passable draft. It'll probably be at least a few weeks before I'm ready on my end, but if I have time I'll e-mail you to ask for your half of the trade earlier. (Thanks for the PM, by the way. 
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If you are in difficulties with a book, try the element of surprise: attack it at an hour when it isn't expecting it. ~ H.G. Wells
If a person offend you, and you are in doubt as to whether it was intentional or not, do not resort to extreme measures; simply watch your chance and hit him with a brick. ~ Mark Twain
R, SF, SHM, SHM, SHM, F, R, HM, SHM, R, HM, R, F, SHM, SHM, SHM, SF, SHM, 1st Place (Q2 V38)
Ticknor Tales
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4th and Starlight: e-book | paperback
My bad. I've been out of the contest for 2 years. Lost track of quarters 
Accomplishments:
SF: V32Q2, V28Q4
HM: V29 Q2, V30 Q2
Dave Farland: Short Story Master's Class, World Building
Viable Paradise XVI
Uncle Orson's 2011
"Stalkworthy"
http://www.francisbruno.com
I've posted this elsewhere but I'll reiterate - I'm always open to critiques for forumites. Some have even said my feedback is helpful.
V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Published Finalist Volume 38
Pro’d out Q4V39
www.rebeccaetreasure.com
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Hi! I've got 1698 words so far, could someone critique my work?
Hi! I've got 1698 words so far, could someone critique my work?
I would suggest you finish the story first and then get critiques on either the whole or whatever beginning section you'd like so as to not get over influenced by your readers' feedback and in case your ending or middle changes your beginning.
After your done though, I'll gladly critique it.
