Forums Members Recent Posts Contact Forums Forum Story Critique Exch... Crit exchange (~5k ... Notifications Clear all Crit exchange (~5k words) Story Critique Exchange Last Post by Adrian 1 week ago 1 Posts 1 Users 1 Reactions 35 Views Adrian (@adrian) Posts: 94 Silver Member Topic starter Hey folks. Looking for some fresh eyes on this one and as usual, happy to take a look in exchange, thanks. F x1 SHM x4 HM x11 RWC x1 R Dozens Posted : March 16, 2025 9:06 am Anna X reacted Share:
