Forums Members Recent Posts Contact Forums Forum Story Critique Exch... Crit exchange (~5k ... Notifications Clear all Crit exchange (~5k words) Story Critique Exchange Last Post by Adrian 9 months ago 1 Posts 1 Users 1 Reactions 477 Views Adrian (@adrian) Posts: 120 Silver Member Topic starter Hey folks. Looking for some fresh eyes on this one and as usual, happy to take a look in exchange, thanks. F x1 SHM x6 HM x13 RWC x1 R Dozens Posted : March 16, 2025 8:06 am Anna X reacted Share:
