Yep, that's not a typo, I'm looking for critique for a one hundred word sci-fi. It's not for WOTF. It's probably terrible. I've not written this short before.
Happy to exchange with something larger: either a piece of flash or a "First 450" of something longer.
VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee
Yep, that's not a typo, I'm looking for critique for a one hundred word sci-fi. It's not for WOTF. It's probably terrible. I've not written this short before.
Happy to exchange with something larger: either a piece of flash or a "First 450" of something longer.
I've written a few Halloween drabbles recently. Not saying they're any good. I'll take a look if you still need an opinion.
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Thanks! Sent you a private message, @TimE.
VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee
@TimE, thanks for the helpful feedback and advice.
VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee
