Howdy folks. Hope everyone is doing well. I would appreciate a critique on my piece, and will happily exchange! (For any WC mind ye)
One issue I had with my last piece was that I over-edited it to death. I've edited this one down a bit (mostly for internal consistences, some things shortened/cut), but I think another set of eyes would be prudent before I make any more serious changes. It currently sits at 9.3k words. Happy to provide a critique for you as well, whether now or in the future.
2021
Q2: HM, Q3: no sub, Q4: HM
2022
Q1: SHM, Q2: Pending, Q3: putting this here so i'm forced to write it
Love to! I’ll send you a message.
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