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Cray Dimensional
(@craydimensional)
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Looking for critique on my 6100 fantasy. I am willing to critique your short story in return. Just PM me your email.


Small steps add up to miles.
5 R, 5 RWC, 9 HM, 1 SHM
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : April 22, 2021 1:53 pm
(@reuben)
Posts: 201
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Posted by: @craydimensional

Looking for critique on my 6100 fantasy. I am willing to critique your short story in return. Just PM me your email.

I should be able to, especially if you get it to me by tomorrow. I've pmed you.


Success is going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm ~ Winston Churchill
V37: R, R, R, HM
V38: SHM

 
Posted : April 22, 2021 2:45 pm
(@ajschultz6)
Posts: 46
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I'm happy to take a look. Sent you a PM.


v37: Q3HM
v38: Q1R, Q2HM, Q3HM
v39: Q2HM, Q3HM, Q4HM
v40: Q1 In Progress
I'm available for critique exchanges via PM. Note: I will not be available for exchanges from 12/17/22-1/1/23.

 
Posted : April 23, 2021 3:57 pm
 DW
(@dwh)
Posts: 17
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Posted by: @craydimensional

Looking for critique on my 6100 fantasy. I am willing to critique your short story in return. Just PM me your email.

I'd be happy to swap critiques. I'll Pm you.


4 SHM 5 HM

 
Posted : April 24, 2021 12:41 pm
Dustin Adams
(@tj_knight)
Posts: 1574
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Cray,

Although I've only read a 450 of yours, I found it quite dandy.

I'd have a look at this story - after this round of critiques. Put me down for the first reader of the revision.

And forget them Rs. Every one I received, I got *after* my first finalist. They happen. And then... they don't. hey!  


Career: 1x Win -- 2x NW-F -- 2x S-F -- 9x S-HM -- 11x HM -- 7x R
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Posted : April 24, 2021 1:12 pm
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Cray Dimensional
(@craydimensional)
Posts: 817
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@axeminister thanks Dustin. I PM’d you.


Small steps add up to miles.
5 R, 5 RWC, 9 HM, 1 SHM
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : April 24, 2021 2:50 pm
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Cray Dimensional
(@craydimensional)
Posts: 817
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Thank you everyone for your offers of critiques. I have reached out to all of you with PM. I think I have enough reviewers for now, but I learned from 2nd QTR when I sent out my story that I had made some significant changes afterword. So I hope you don't mind if tap for one or two more reviews in about 2 weeks. I would like to stagger the phone a friends a little.


Small steps add up to miles.
5 R, 5 RWC, 9 HM, 1 SHM
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : April 25, 2021 10:58 am
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CeciBlack
(@ceciblack)
Posts: 40
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Posted by: @craydimensional

Thank you everyone for your offers of critiques. I have reached out to all of you with PM. I think I have enough reviewers for now, but I learned from 2nd QTR when I sent out my story that I had made some significant changes afterword. So I hope you don't mind if tap for one or two more reviews in about 2 weeks. I would like to stagger the phone a friends a little.

Hey Cray, if you still want fresh eyes on this one, PM me.

Ceci

 


Ceci Black
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Free Album: Captains of Industry (vocals, lyrics, keys & occasional bass)
Composer: Will & Whit The Musical based on Laura Lee Gulledge’s young adult graphic novel, Will & Whit.
v38: HM,--,R,HM
v39: HM,SHM,SHM,F

 
Posted : May 1, 2021 3:27 pm
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