I'd really appreciate some opinions on my 2.6K story. I'm new here and not an experienced critiquer, but would be happy to return the favour to the best of my ability.
JW
"Any opinions about this post?"
No takers and, hm, did I also manage to kill this entire board ...?
"It's worse than that — it's dead, Jim!"
Here's an attempt to blow some (possibly undead) life into this board:
I've got a critique from Morshana — thank you, thank you, THANK YOU — but would really like an additional pair of eyes on my story/possible Q1 submission. It's quite short and, based on Morshana's comments, not that painful to get through. I'll of course return the favour.
Pretty please?
I'd be glad to have a look. Please send it to my email at [email protected]. I tried to send a pm, but my pm's get stuck in the outbox, so I'm trying this.
Terry Madden:
V.30 Q1 W
Sent you a PM JW. So sorry for your lack of response. Certain times of year can be dead on this part of the board. I'm sure Nanowrimo will make it worse for this month too. Just send your story to me copy, cut, and paste in the PM.
Tina
