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I recently went though and heavily revised one of my stories (took out 2 characters and streamlined the story a bit). I would like a critique on it before I put it out in submission to see if the story is without obvious flaws.

Please PM me with your requests.


Michael Beers
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Posted : June 19, 2012 5:05 am
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