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Critique Swap - 2500 Word, Dystopian

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Ramya (Writhmic)
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I've got a 2500ish word story in need of critiquing. It's dystopian and I don't plan on submitting this to WotF. I can critique anything of similar length. Anyone up for it?


V39: -- / SHM / SHM / RWC
V40: HM / SHM / SHM / SHM
V41: RWC / HM / SHM / --
V42: -- / SHM / P / WIP

A labor of love: www.starspunlit.org

 
Posted : October 12, 2022 12:26 pm
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DoctorJest
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I have nothing to exchange with it right now, but I can give this a critique if you like.


DQ:0 / R:0 / RWC:3 / HM:15 / SHM:7 / SF:1 / F:1

 
Posted : October 12, 2022 5:28 pm
Adrian
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Happy to do a swap. Mine is around 4k words, if that works for you. Smile I will DM.


F x1
SHM x5
HM x13
RWC x1
R Dozens

 
Posted : November 5, 2022 11:14 am
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Posted by: @writhmic

I've got a 2500ish word story in need of critiquing. It's dystopian and I don't plan on submitting this to WotF. I can critique anything of similar length. Anyone up for it?

I need to get writing so I can have something to swap, but I'll be happy to give you an opinion if you'd still like. Feel free to dm me or email me at: [email protected]

 


*When one door closes, another one opens. Here’s to a new chapter! Onward!*

 
Posted : November 13, 2022 8:22 pm
Ramya (Writhmic)
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@annax Hey, I'm actually not looking to swap right now. Thanks for the offer though!


V39: -- / SHM / SHM / RWC
V40: HM / SHM / SHM / SHM
V41: RWC / HM / SHM / --
V42: -- / SHM / P / WIP

A labor of love: www.starspunlit.org

 
Posted : November 13, 2022 8:23 pm
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Spencer_S
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Hello there. If you're still working on the story, I'd be happy to take a look. No exchange needed.


“Stories are the collective wisdom of everyone who has ever lived. Your job as a storyteller is not simply to entertain. Nor is it to be noticed for the way your turn a phrase. You have a very important job—one of the most important. Your job is to let people know that everyone shares their feelings—and that these feelings bind us. Your job is a healing art, and like all healers, you have a responsibility. Let people know they are not alone. You must make people understand that we are all the same.”
Brian McDonald
2022: Second Place Winner V39 Q1
2021: HM, HM, SHM
2020: R
2019: SHM, R
2018: HM
2017: HM
Check out my fiction and more at spencersekulin.net

 
Posted : November 24, 2022 9:06 am
Ramya (Writhmic)
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@spencer_s Thank you for the offer but I've got that story on hold right now.


V39: -- / SHM / SHM / RWC
V40: HM / SHM / SHM / SHM
V41: RWC / HM / SHM / --
V42: -- / SHM / P / WIP

A labor of love: www.starspunlit.org

 
Posted : November 24, 2022 9:59 am
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