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czing
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Posted by: @rschibler

@czing That's a great question! I can take a look at stories that are going to Apex - I'll just skip them in the slush pile Smile We have plenty of slush readers, so no worries there.

However, if you're planning to submit to our monthly micro fiction contest, I can't read those as I am the sole judge. You can submit, but if the winner I choose is someone I know well, the top five stories will get passed up to one of the supervising editors.

It would be funny/terrible if a story you thought was great got pushed to another slush reader who hated it LOL. But thanks for the answers here. 

 

And I don't know how I have never looked into that micro fiction contest. I love writing micro fic.

v36 Q1, Q3 - HM; Q4 - R
v37 Q1 - R; Q2 - SHM; Q4 - HM
v38 Q1 - HM; Q2 - SHM; Q3 - HM; Q4 - HM
v39 Q1 - SHM; Q3 - HM; Q4 -RWC
v40 Q1, Q2 - HM; Q3 - Pending

 
Posted : November 11, 2021 12:23 pm
Ramya (Writhmic)
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Anyone up for a swap?

V39: -- / SHM / SHM / RWC
V40: HM / SHM / SHM / SHM
V41: RWC / HM / SHM / WIP

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Posted : January 31, 2022 3:58 pm
James (Ease)
(@ease)
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@writhmic I'll swap with you! Would you prefer to read a fantasy or a sci-fi? DM me yours either way!

VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee

 
Posted : January 31, 2022 8:15 pm
Shockhawk
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Anyone up for a swap?  I got a sci-fi opening!!



 

Now! This is it! Now is the time to choose! Die and be free of pain, or live and fight your sorrow! Now is the time to shape your stories! Your fate is in your hands! - Auron FFX
Vol 37 - X, R, R, R
Vol 38 - HM, X, X, X
Vol 39 - HM, HM, X, X
Vol 40 - X, X, HM, R
Vol 41 - R, WIP,

 
Posted : February 10, 2022 6:26 pm
Ramya (Writhmic)
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Sure! Sent you a DM!

V39: -- / SHM / SHM / RWC
V40: HM / SHM / SHM / SHM
V41: RWC / HM / SHM / WIP

A product of sweat and tears: www.starspunlit.org

 
Posted : February 10, 2022 8:16 pm
James (Ease)
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After a handful of 100-hour weeks at work, I'm finally getting a breather and dropping to 60-ish hours, hopefully for a few weeks at least. Does anyone want to do a 450 swap? I'm peddling a historical urban fantasy.

VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee

 
Posted : July 28, 2022 3:00 pm
Dustin Adams
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@ease I'm down. [email protected]
Mine is either interesting or wtf (Kary's definition, not mine) giggle  

Career: 1x Win -- 2x NW-F -- 2x S-F -- 9x S-HM -- 11x HM -- 7x R
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Posted : August 2, 2022 4:43 am
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@ease 

I'm down too. @annax

@axeminister

I'm also down if you want to share or swap or whichever. smiley  

~ I honestly believe that good stories write themselves. You can always start writing a story, but the characters tell their own tales and if you're lucky enough, you get to merely be in the audience watching everything unfold. ~ 8/1/2022
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WotF - 2022, V39 Q4: R
WotF - 2022/2023, V40 Q1: HM; Q2: HM; Q3: HM; Q4:HM
WoTF - 2025, V42 Q1: P

 
Posted : August 2, 2022 8:58 am
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Wahlquistj
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I’m down. DM me and I’ll send one back. 

V33- SF
V38- SHM, HM
V39- HM,R
V40- HM
V41- Q2-SHM, Q3-SHM, Q4-SHM

 
Posted : August 2, 2022 9:27 am
James (Ease)
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Thanks @axeminister, @annax, @wahlquistj, I've DMed you all!

VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee

 
Posted : August 2, 2022 11:22 am
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Wahlquistj
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Posted by: @ease

Thanks @axeminister, @annax, @wahlquistj, I've DMed you all!

@ease, just returned yours. Smile Any other takers?

V33- SF
V38- SHM, HM
V39- HM,R
V40- HM
V41- Q2-SHM, Q3-SHM, Q4-SHM

 
Posted : August 2, 2022 5:07 pm
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(@annax)
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@wahlquistj I’ll trade with you, if you’d like. It’ll help me get back into doing writer things. 

~ I honestly believe that good stories write themselves. You can always start writing a story, but the characters tell their own tales and if you're lucky enough, you get to merely be in the audience watching everything unfold. ~ 8/1/2022
***
WotF - 2022, V39 Q4: R
WotF - 2022/2023, V40 Q1: HM; Q2: HM; Q3: HM; Q4:HM
WoTF - 2025, V42 Q1: P

 
Posted : August 2, 2022 5:28 pm
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Wahlquistj
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Posted by: @annax

@wahlquistj I’ll trade with you, if you’d like. It’ll help me get back into doing writer things. 

Great! DM me whenever you’re ready. 

V33- SF
V38- SHM, HM
V39- HM,R
V40- HM
V41- Q2-SHM, Q3-SHM, Q4-SHM

 
Posted : August 2, 2022 5:46 pm
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Dustin Adams
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Bumping for visibility as we near the end of the quarter.

Career: 1x Win -- 2x NW-F -- 2x S-F -- 9x S-HM -- 11x HM -- 7x R
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Posted : December 8, 2022 1:39 am
Mark Wilkinson
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We're at the beginning of 2023 Q2, and I have a fantasy story.  Still working the ending, but the beginning is ready to go.  Drop me a DM if you'd like to exchange.

Mark

https://www.MarkWilx.com

 
Posted : January 4, 2023 8:17 am
James (Ease)
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@markwilx DM'ed you. Also open to exchanging with others.

VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee

 
Posted : January 4, 2023 1:13 pm
Joel C. Scoberg
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@ease and @markwilx I'm happy to take a look, I've not reviewed just 450 words before but hope I'll be of help - I'll send you a DM. And I have a 450-word piece if anyone is interested.

3rd Place Q3 Vol 41
Submission record: R x 2 / HM x 7 / SHM x 2 / W x 1
Stories published in Daily Science Fiction, Every Day Fiction, 365tomorrows, and Gwyllion Magazine.

 
Posted : January 20, 2023 6:49 am
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James (Ease)
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Stopping by to report that I exchanged with @joel-c-scoberg and @markwilx and they were both very prompt and helpful (as were @wahlquistj and @writhmic earlier last year).

VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee

 
Posted : January 31, 2023 11:40 am
Todd Jones
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I keep finding fun areas in this forum.

 

I'm working on Q2 and my first chapter/section is 523 - story doesn't make sense at just 450 words when the chapter end is so close.  

I'm going to run through it and see if I can tighten it up.  If so, I'll post back for an exchange. I know I can use all the help I can get.

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford

2025 V42: WIP
2024 V41: RWC (Resubmitted "HM"), HM, RWC, Finalist (RWC Resubmit)
2023 V40: HM, HM, R, HM
2022 V39: SHM, HM, Semi-finalist, HM (HM Resubmit)
2021 V38: ---HM (R Resubmit)
2020 V37: -R--

 
Posted : January 31, 2023 12:51 pm
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James (Ease)
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@toddjones I'd love to exchange, and happy to accommodate the extra words. Private message me when it's ready, if you're keen.

VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee

 
Posted : February 2, 2023 9:22 am
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sconn
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I know it’s early into Q3, but I’m second guessing if my current story is worth the push to finish or if I should start drafting another one. Doesn’t help that it’s unlike anything I’ve written before.

Let me know if anyone has some time to take a look at the first 450. Happy to swap - I’m new here but I’ve been Beta reading for years and enjoy giving feedback. 

V40: Q1 HM Q2 HM Q3 HM Q4 HM

 
Posted : April 7, 2023 8:56 am
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storysinger
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I will look at it sconn. PM me.

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Posted : April 7, 2023 2:08 pm
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Cherrie
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@sconn hi, I’ll give it a read. PM me.

Volume 41 Q1 Illustrator Winner!
4x Finalist Illustrators
5x Semi finalist Illustrators
1x HM Illustrators
7x HM Writers
3x SHM Writers
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Posted : April 9, 2023 8:30 pm
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James (Ease)
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@sconn If you want a third set of eyes, PM it my way, too.

VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee

 
Posted : April 10, 2023 12:26 pm
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Dustin Adams
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See what happens when you post early in a new quarter? ? 

I'm still open for 450's as well. Maybe I can have a look once you gather all feedback. Or if you're satisfied, I'll look at whoever posts below.

Career: 1x Win -- 2x NW-F -- 2x S-F -- 9x S-HM -- 11x HM -- 7x R
Like me: facebook/AuthorTJKnight

 
Posted : April 11, 2023 2:19 am
MountainSpud
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Posted by: @sconn

if my current story is worth the push to finish

Consider the push regardless of the first 450. I've often found the true story only after I finish the first draft & revise accordingly for my 2nd draft. Note I'm a pantser, too often a prancer. 

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V40: Q1 3rd Place Winner ("Squiddy")
V39: SHM, HM, HM, HM
V38: HM, SHM, HM, HM
V37: R, R, HM, HM
V36: R

 
Posted : April 11, 2023 8:18 am
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sconn
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@jeschleicher yes, ditto! Good point.

V40: Q1 HM Q2 HM Q3 HM Q4 HM

 
Posted : April 11, 2023 1:20 pm
Joel C. Scoberg
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Posts: 366
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I've got the first 450 words of a potential entry for Q3. Well, it's more like 457 words but I'm hoping you'll indulge those extra seven words than make me cut the last half of the final sentence giggle   I'm happy to swap with anyone else too

 

3rd Place Q3 Vol 41
Submission record: R x 2 / HM x 7 / SHM x 2 / W x 1
Stories published in Daily Science Fiction, Every Day Fiction, 365tomorrows, and Gwyllion Magazine.

 
Posted : April 25, 2023 1:16 am
James (Ease)
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@joel-c-scoberg feel free to slide into my DMs giggle

VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee

 
Posted : April 25, 2023 3:33 am
sconn
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Posts: 28
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@joel-c-scoberg 

I’m happy to read it - PM me if you’d like. 

V40: Q1 HM Q2 HM Q3 HM Q4 HM

 
Posted : April 25, 2023 5:44 am
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