I tried my hand at writing a retelling (not for WotF). I did some experimenting with the style so I was hoping I could get some fresh eyes to critique it and let me know what works and what doesn't. I'd be happy to critique something in return!
It's about 5k words.
V39: -- / SHM / SHM / RWC
V40: HM / SHM / SHM / SHM
V41: RWC / HM / SHM / --
V42: -- / SHM / P / WIP
A labor of love: www.starspunlit.org
Writhmic
I'll look at the first five pages if you like!
You can attach them to a PM. Or send me a Google doc, whatever works!
AS
Thanks! Sent you a PM
V39: -- / SHM / SHM / RWC
V40: HM / SHM / SHM / SHM
V41: RWC / HM / SHM / --
V42: -- / SHM / P / WIP
A labor of love: www.starspunlit.org
I'd be happy to look over it! Send me a PM; I can get it back to you by tomorrow.
My readers call me Gilbert???
2022: Q3 - SHM; Q4 - HM
2023: Q1 - Pass; Q2 - Submitted
