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                    So I put in my first submission last quarter and got rejected. Reading over the first section, I doubt Dave even got past the first page so I have been doing a complete rewrite. The story is on the longer end nearing the max word limit, but I'm searching for a critique primarily on the first 1900 words. I really believe in this story and want to see it through to the best it can be.
Is anyone interested in helping me out?
I would be more than willing to do a swap if preferred, longer, shorter, doesn't matter.
                            Posted : November 19, 2018 5:56 pm		                    						
                    	
                    Always
V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Published Finalist Volume 38
Pro’d out Q4V39
www.rebeccaetreasure.com
Managing Editor, Apex Magazine
                            Posted : November 20, 2018 12:35 am		                    						
                    	
                    
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                    I sent you an email. Thanks
                            Posted : November 20, 2018 5:11 pm		                    						
                    	
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