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C.A.Tedeschi
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Haven't submitted in a while. I will start a WotF story soon.

 

Private Message me with your Word count and genre and i promise to get back to you soon. You can also leave any specific questions you'd like me to answer after reading.

 

Thank you for sharing, and for having the courage to be open to criticism. 

Sincerely, Carmine A. Tedeschi 

 

1st try: Story: 'Hondo's Honor, Genre: Heroic Fantasy, Response date: July 14, 2020, Result: Honorable Mention

2nd try: Story: 'Fen and the Every Path, Genre: Heroic Fantasy, Response date: April 23, 2021, Result: Silver Honorable Mention

Both stories are self-published on Amazon.

 
Posted : January 23, 2022 4:52 pm
James (Ease), Álex Souza, storysinger and 1 people reacted
R.W.Ware
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I need a critique. 

 
Posted : January 27, 2022 2:16 pm
C.A.Tedeschi
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4 critiques done so far.

 
Posted : February 4, 2022 7:29 am
James (Ease)
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Huge, huge thanks to @c-a-tedeschi for a wonderful critique. He provided a great balance of tough love and kind encouragement, and I always appreciate someone willing to tell the hard truths.

VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee

 
Posted : February 4, 2022 9:35 am
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