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Improve my story past HM: 7800 word sci-fi

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Joe Benet
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Hoping for experienced eyes to critique my latest entry, help me identify what kept it from SHM level. Thanks!

HMx9
SHMx1 (Q2'22)
2xCritiquer for Published Winners (Oh yeah, it's now a thing)

 
Posted : November 30, 2024 10:36 am
DoctorJest
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If you didn't already get eyes on this, I'd be happy to take a look. No guarantees I can help you nudge it up to SHM or above, but I'll certainly try!

DQ:0 / R:0 / RWC:1 / HM:15 / SHM:7 / SF:1 / F:1
Published prior WotF entries: PodCastle, HFQ, Abyss & Apex
Pending: Q2.V42

 
Posted : December 9, 2024 2:19 pm
Cider
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Hey! I'm in a similar position with a SHM I'd like to get more critique on with the hopes of making finalist. I'd be happy to swap if you're still interested, though mine is a fair bit longer at nearly 13k.

 
Posted : March 17, 2025 4:40 pm
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