So I have a story here that needs a little editing and I'd be grateful to wants to help. In return, I'll assist you with your own story.
My story is just under the 17,000 word limit so novelette size. Hopefully, that won't be a problem.
Is it fantasy or sci fi?
eltodanzig.wordpress.com
2018 Finalist Baen Publishing Fantasy Adventure Award
V35Q3: HM | V35Q4: First round pass
I can’t do 17,000 words right now but I’m happy to do a first 450 crit for you.
V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Published Finalist Volume 38
Pro’d out Q4V39
www.rebeccaetreasure.com
Managing Editor, Apex Magazine
I can do a general critique, though not a detailed one for 17K. Will PM you.
Michelle Pang
1xFinalist, 10xHM
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