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In Need of a Story Critique for Q2

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(@kid_icarus305)
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So I have a story here that needs a little editing and I'd be grateful to wants to help. In return, I'll assist you with your own story.

My story is just under the 17,000 word limit so novelette size. Hopefully, that won't be a problem.


 
Posted : June 19, 2018 6:04 am
(@elto_danzig)
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Is it fantasy or sci fi?


eltodanzig.wordpress.com
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Posted : June 19, 2018 12:16 pm
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
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I can’t do 17,000 words right now but I’m happy to do a first 450 crit for you.


V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Published Finalist Volume 38
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Posted : June 19, 2018 12:31 pm
(@ym-pang)
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I can do a general critique, though not a detailed one for 17K. Will PM you.


Michelle Pang
http://www.ympang.com
1xFinalist, 10xHM

"Subtle Ways Each Time" in Escape Pod.
"The Palace of the Silver Dragon" in Strange Horizons.

 
Posted : June 19, 2018 4:27 pm
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