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Spencer_S
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Hello everyone!

I'm looking for some critiques for a story of mine. I will gladly look at your stories as well. PM me if interested, I appreciate it. Thank you.

Regards,

Spencer

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Posted : April 18, 2022 1:24 pm
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James (Ease)
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Hi Spencer,

Apologies, my current work schedule permits me from almost all writing/reading, however, a tidbit of advice: include length and genre in your request, so that would-be critiquers know if it's something they're well-suited to or not.

Best of luck.

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Posted : April 19, 2022 5:40 pm
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Posted by: @spencer_s

Hello everyone!

I'm looking for some critiques for a story of mine. I will gladly look at your stories as well. PM me if interested, I appreciate it. Thank you.

Regards,

Spencer

Hi Spencer. I'd be happy to take a look. Let me know if there's any specific kind of feedback you're looking for. Just DM the story whenever you're ready.

 

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Posted : April 20, 2022 6:45 am
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Posted by: @ease

a tidbit of advice: include length and genre in your request, perhaps even a super-short summary, so that would-be critiquers know if it's something they're well-suited to or not.

Don't post the summary in the forum. If a future judge happens to scan it, there goes your anonymity. Posting it in the DM though, sounds safe.

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Posted : April 22, 2022 6:18 am
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Posted by: @spencer_s

Hello everyone!

I'm looking for some critiques for a story of mine. I will gladly look at your stories as well. PM me if interested, I appreciate it. Thank you.

Regards,

Spencer

Just DM'd you some feedback. Hope it helps, and thanks for letting me read it. Give me a shout if you have any followup questions.

 

"You can either sit here and write, or you can sit here and do nothing. But you can’t sit here and do anything else."
— Neil Gaiman, Masterclass

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R/RWCx5

 
Posted : April 22, 2022 10:36 am
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James (Ease)
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Posted by: @joebenet
Posted by: @ease

a tidbit of advice: include length and genre in your request, perhaps even a super-short summary, so that would-be critiquers know if it's something they're well-suited to or not.

Don't post the summary in the forum. If a future judge happens to scan it, there goes your anonymity. Posting it in the DM though, sounds safe.

Oh, shoot! You're totally right; can't believe I forgot. I've corrected the original post.

VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee

 
Posted : April 24, 2022 3:40 pm
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That's a request I haven't seen here before. Welcome to the forum Robert Palmer. 

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Posted : July 14, 2022 9:06 am
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