Hello, as mentioned, would love to get some fresh eyes on my story for this quarter (Q4). About 6.5k words. Happy to return favor.
Best,
Adrian.
F x1
SHM x4
HM x11
RWC x1
R Dozens
Hi Adrian - I'd be happy to give it a quick read and provide some feedback. Shoot me a PM with the file and what areas of feedback you're looking for and I can take a look at it next week. My Q4 is already in, but maybe you can take a look at my Q1 for next year. It's done too, but not submitted yet (obviously).
(7) HM, (2) SHM
I'll DM you.
VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee
Just wanted to say thanks for the critique swap, @adrian. You helped confirm what I think I already suspected, but hadn't admitted, was the weakness of my piece.
VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee
