Right then!
I figure it's time to jump off into the deep end and see if I can get a story critique from you lovely souls! ?
This'll be my first such outing here, so you'll have to forgive me if I'm unsure of standard practices. Like, do we tend to send the story to be reviewed over email or is it easier to add the viewer to a google doc? Whatever is easier for y'all would be fine with me.
I am certainly willing to do an exchange, though being the newbie I am, I'm entirely not sure how helpful my advice would be.
Anyway, if anyone would be interested in taking a look, let me know.
R- 1 or 2. Or 3. Possibly 25.
HM-8
SHM-0
SF-1
F-0
W-Inevitable
Always happy to take a look. DM me for my email - I prefer to work in google docs because I don’t have word on my laptop but I am flexible.
V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Published Finalist Volume 38
Pro’d out Q4V39
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If you'd like another look, I'm available. PM me.
Success is going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm ~ Winston Churchill
V37: R, R, R, HM
V38: SHM
I'd be happy to take a look. Sent you a PM.
v37: Q3HM
v38: Q1R, Q2HM, Q3HM
v39: Q2HM, Q3HM, Q4HM
v40: Q1 In Progress
I'm available for critique exchanges via PM. Note: I will not be available for exchanges from 12/17/22-1/1/23.
I'd be happy to critique. I'll pm you.
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V37- R, HM, SHM, HM
V38- HM, SHM, Winner (3rd place)
Hi Donovan.
I'm a relative newbie to the forum as well. Happy to do a critique swap (although you seem to already have heaps of offers).
I actually wanted to mention the critiques here are fantastic. I got one done for last Quarter and the feedback I received was very encouraging, but also incredibly useful.
So let them have at your story!
It's worth it.
Scott
"If writing is easy, you're doing it wrong." -Bryan Hutchinson
V36-37: R x6
V38: R, HM, R, HM
V39: HM, HM, HM, HM
V40: HM, HM, SHM, HM
V41: RWC, P
Hi Donavan,
If you want me to review let me know. I will PM you my email.
Cray
Small steps add up to miles.
5 R, 5 RWC, 6 HM, 1 SHM
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