Hey all,
I've got a 4400 word military sci fi piece I'm looking at getting feedback on. I'll happily critique whatever sub genre you got in exchange, any length. Let me know if you are interested.
Gavin
1 x hm
1 x r
I’ll take it!
Need 2 weeks to complete bc I’m on the road. If OK, send me a PM.
Career: 1x Win -- 2x NW-F -- 2x S-F -- 9x S-HM -- 11x HM -- 7x R
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I can take a look as well, if you'd like a second pair of eyes on it 
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2022: Second Place Winner V39 Q1
2021: HM, HM, SHM
2020: R
2019: SHM, R
2018: HM
2017: HM
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So cool there are helpful people in this forum.
If those two offers fall through, I can take a look.
BTW: My Semi-finalist was a military sci-fi, so maybe that's the ticket to win. Watch the swearing ("damn" being the worst I used) and ensure there isn't too much blood splatter (Riddle me this; How can you have a military sci-fi without blood splatter?). I took the approach of "double-tap" and the worst blood splatter was, "arm, most of its head, and part of the archway wall had been blasted away. Its body wavered and then fell forward."
Other than that advice, have fun and write some good stuff.
"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford
2025 V42: WIP
2024 V41: RWC (Resubmitted "HM"), HM, RWC, Finalist (RWC Resubmit)
2023 V40: HM, HM, R, HM
2022 V39: SHM, HM, Semi-finalist, HM (HM Resubmit)
2021 V38: ---HM (R Resubmit)
2020 V37: -R--
I have a 5k word historical fantasy to swap. Send me a PM if you still need eyes.
3 x SHM
10 x HM
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