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Need a critique for my WOTF story

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(@temidayo)
Posts: 3
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Topic starter
 

I am new on this platform. So I am looking for someone to take a look at my story. It is about 6000 words long.

Here is my email : [email protected]

I will really appreciate helping hands. Thanks.


 
Posted : June 1, 2020 12:16 pm
Rey Nichols
(@rnichols)
Posts: 63
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I'll take a look at it, send me a PM. Smile


SHM: 1
HM: 9
R: 1
www.reynichols.com

 
Posted : June 1, 2020 3:57 pm
(@scafontaine)
Posts: 119
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I will too. Send me a PM.


 
Posted : June 1, 2020 10:46 pm
empressed
(@empressed)
Posts: 228
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I could use a crit and will reciprocate. It's a 12K word historical fantasy.


Victoria Dixon
Author of Mourn Their Courage
a 2010 Sandy Writing Contest Finalist
A Tribble Ate My Lunch: a Star Trek Cookbook (unpublished)
R=24
HM= 8
SHM=4
Finalist=1

 
Posted : June 3, 2020 8:38 am
(@reuben)
Posts: 201
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Sure, my PM's aren't working right now, though. Maybe send me an email.


Success is going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm ~ Winston Churchill
V37: R, R, R, HM
V38: SHM

 
Posted : June 3, 2020 8:47 am
(@temidayo)
Posts: 3
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Hi Guys, I have send you all a PM. And Reuben, I have also sent you an email. I await your responses. I thought you guys would contact me via my email. So I didn't bother checking back. That's why my response came late. I am sorry about that. But anyway, I await your responses.


 
Posted : June 4, 2020 5:57 pm
David K
(@david-k)
Posts: 149
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Empressed, I may have jumped in too late, so go with whats on offer, but happy to take a look.

David K


Very sporadic submitter but 9 HMs: latest Q1 2021
Author of Gateway Through Time: Available at https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1112672

 
Posted : June 4, 2020 9:59 pm
empressed
(@empressed)
Posts: 228
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Thanks, David. I'm always grateful for a critique! If you still have time by the end of this coming week, I will have made changes and need fresh eyes. Either way, I'll be happy to read yours, so send it to [email protected].


Victoria Dixon
Author of Mourn Their Courage
a 2010 Sandy Writing Contest Finalist
A Tribble Ate My Lunch: a Star Trek Cookbook (unpublished)
R=24
HM= 8
SHM=4
Finalist=1

 
Posted : June 5, 2020 2:53 am
David K
(@david-k)
Posts: 149
Bronze Star Member
 

Thanks, David. I'm always grateful for a critique! If you still have time by the end of this coming week, I will have made changes and need fresh eyes. Either way, I'll be happy to read yours, so send it to [email protected].

Happy to - [email protected]


Very sporadic submitter but 9 HMs: latest Q1 2021
Author of Gateway Through Time: Available at https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1112672

 
Posted : June 8, 2020 10:38 pm
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