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I could use some help finding nitpicks with this 10,093 word story. Not WotF even though I have thought about using it as such. Even though it has a vampire and a minor wizard in it, it's more a relationship story.
I'm sure the writing needs help but now I want to concentrate on the typos, bad grammar, really bad sentences, commas and such. Maybe cut out one hundred words or so too. But that isn't super important. If possible I would like it by Thursday but again that isn't super important.
Of course I can crit your story.
Working on turning Lead into Gold.
Four HMs From WotF
The latest was Q1'12
HM-quarter 4 Volume 32
One HM for another contest
published in Strange New Worlds Ten.
Another HM http://onthepremises.com/minis/mini_18.html
Posted : April 7, 2013 3:28 pm
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