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Matthew Chambers
(@hyperion88)
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Hello! I'm looking for reader feedback!

Several people have looked at this story at this point, but I'm looking for another pair of eyes on it. I'd kindly do the same for you if interested. The story is just under 5,000 words. If you're interested, send me an email at [email protected] or a private message - also I know it's a busy time of year with the Holidays, so I appreciate any time people can give me and I look forward to reading your work!

R: 2 / HM: 1 / SHM: 2/ SF: 0 / F: 1

 
Posted : December 21, 2021 4:14 pm
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
Posts: 962
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If you would like me to look at the first five pages I’d be happy to do a deep dive on them. DM me if you’re interested 

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Published Finalist Volume 38
Pro’d out Q4V39
www.rebeccaetreasure.com

Managing Editor, Apex Magazine

 
Posted : December 24, 2021 4:44 pm
 TimE
(@time)
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I haven't got past SHM, so not sure if i can help. But i'll give it a try,

?

 
Posted : December 25, 2021 4:23 am
Matthew Chambers
(@hyperion88)
Posts: 10
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@time Any feedback is good! I'll DM you.

R: 2 / HM: 1 / SHM: 2/ SF: 0 / F: 1

 
Posted : December 25, 2021 11:27 am
(@cxloi)
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Sent you a message

 
Posted : January 6, 2022 2:31 am
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