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(@ishmael)
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Here's the problem, my friends. Six consecutive quarters of HM / SHM. wotf008

One more pro sale puts me out of the competition. wotf005

Can my Q4 sci fi tale be got into adequate shape to make the final? Draft is now ready.

If you think you can help, please PM me. I sometimes have more clarity of vision when critiquing than when writing and will be happy to do what I can by way of return.


1 x SF, 2 x SHM, 11 x HM, WotF batting average .583
Blog The View From Sliabh Mannan.

 
Posted : July 21, 2016 4:43 am
(@ishmael)
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I should perhaps have clarified that the above post is not addressed only to previous winners or finalists.

In previous exchanges I have benefited from advice from a wide range of people and I hope to continue to do so.
wotf007


1 x SF, 2 x SHM, 11 x HM, WotF batting average .583
Blog The View From Sliabh Mannan.

 
Posted : July 24, 2016 4:59 am
Disgruntled Peony
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I need a couple of weeks before I'll be sane enough to do any critiquing, but I'll be willing to exchange stories with you at that point. wotf007


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Posted : July 24, 2016 5:57 am
(@ishmael)
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I shall look forward to it. wotf007


1 x SF, 2 x SHM, 11 x HM, WotF batting average .583
Blog The View From Sliabh Mannan.

 
Posted : July 25, 2016 10:44 pm
(@olddarth)
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Count me in too but I am also a couple of weeks from having my piece ready for review.

I've sent you a PM - Ishmael.


 
Posted : July 26, 2016 2:15 am
(@ishmael)
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Excellent. I'll be ready when you are. wotf007


1 x SF, 2 x SHM, 11 x HM, WotF batting average .583
Blog The View From Sliabh Mannan.

 
Posted : July 26, 2016 5:45 am
(@olddarth)
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You can send your story whenever you feel it's ready.


 
Posted : July 26, 2016 6:30 am
Galen
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You may decide you already have enough viewpoints at this point, but if not, I'd be happy to be a reader as well.

I have a Q4 ready for review as well to exchange (science fiction), but it clocks in at 12K (by the unofficial Microsoft word count).

I would be happy to give comments on yours even if you don't have time for further exchange. I recall reading one of your published stories on the web and quite enjoyed it.


Finalist x2
Semi x1
SHM x5
HM x9
R - lots!

 
Posted : July 27, 2016 12:14 am
(@ishmael)
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Sent you a PM Galen.


1 x SF, 2 x SHM, 11 x HM, WotF batting average .583
Blog The View From Sliabh Mannan.

 
Posted : July 27, 2016 2:45 am
Galen
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Awesome - thanks!


Finalist x2
Semi x1
SHM x5
HM x9
R - lots!

 
Posted : July 28, 2016 12:51 am
(@ishmael)
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Apologies to others who may have tried to contact me. I hadn't realised my inbox was full. It should be all right now.


1 x SF, 2 x SHM, 11 x HM, WotF batting average .583
Blog The View From Sliabh Mannan.

 
Posted : August 9, 2016 5:55 am
(@ishmael)
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Thanks everyone. Story has duly been launched into the fray!


1 x SF, 2 x SHM, 11 x HM, WotF batting average .583
Blog The View From Sliabh Mannan.

 
Posted : September 4, 2016 4:25 am
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