This happens to be my first post (but certainly not the last) on this board and but it also happens that this one is very important to me. I've been working on this story for quite some time now, revising and editing and re-writing as I went. It's a Military SF story and I'm looking for some feedback, so I took an excerpt out where I feel the story really picks up. I'm finally home for summer break but have found myself bored beyond measure. I will literally read any story, lengthy or not, just give me something to do!
Be as honest or blunt with your critique of the story as you deem necessary, I take criticism very well.
PM me, please!
Thanks!
Welcome Mr. Ohiostate.
How long is your tale?
Sometimes that can help a person determine if they have the time to crit/swap.
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2,013 words! So a pretty quick read. Thanks Dustin, I'll definitely post a word count next time!
Ohio, I'm down to swap. I'm not very strong at grammar or at age old rules and formatting procedures. But I have a good feel for the significance and quality that information provides. I have up to 43,000 but can be split up into smaller comparable size.
I'd love to have a look at it, too. email it to me.
Q4/31: Submitted 9/30 e-sub. HM 12/9/14 by email.
Q3/30: Submitted 6/30 e-sub. rejected...meh, sometime.
Q4/29: Submitted 9/28 e-sub. Rejected 12/11/12 email.
Q3/29: Submitted 6/30 e-sub. withdrawn 7/10.
Q2/29: Submitted 1/16 e-sub. Rejected 7/9 email.
