Dear all. I am looking for someone with whom to swap a short sci-fi piece (only ca. 1500 words). My last entry (unwisely) pushed the contest’s length limit, so I am trying something different this time.
I am happy to critique anything, but I’m not a native English speaker, and I’ll probably have more to say about the story itself than finer points of language (although I know they cannot be fully separated). For the same reason, I greatly appreciate any feedback on my own use of English – mistakes, awkward sentence structure, nuances of meaning, stilted or unnatural dialoge and so on. I definitely I have room for improvement.
Also, my bookshelf is full of works on European medieval history, so I might have some insight if you’re using any type of medievalesque setting.
I hope to hear from you! 
Didrik
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DM me. Happy to take a look
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@ease Thank you for the offer! I have already gotten a few critiques of it, so I don't need any more at the moment. 
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