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(@ulysses5284)
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Hey everyone,

Hope the holiday season went well for everyone wotf008. Anywho, I have 14,800ish words in need of critiqueing. I know that's quite a chunk and I I apologize for it in advance. If that's too much...which it may very well be...then I'm open to a critiqueing of any length and don't care to swap if desired. I'm mostly looking for someone to tear into the settings/descriptions of my work, with a second, minor focus upon the dialogue as well. Of course, if anything else stands out, please don't hesitate to say so. I have thick skin and value constructive criticism above all else. Thank you in advance and I hope everyone has a wonderful day!


 
Posted : January 16, 2020 9:21 am
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
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You can send it to me. At that size it’ll take me a few days but should be within a week.


V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Published Finalist Volume 38
Pro’d out Q4V39
www.rebeccaetreasure.com

Managing Editor, Apex Magazine

 
Posted : January 16, 2020 10:44 am
Alex Harford
(@alexh)
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I can critique the first 5,000 words if that sounds helpful. PM a Google Docs link or your e-mail address if so. I'll have a 3,000-4,000 word story for exchange in a week or so.


35: - R R R | 36: R HM R R | 37: HM HM HM SHM | 38: HM HM HM HM | 39: HM HM HM SHM | 40: HM R SHM SHM | 41: R HM SHM R
5 SHM / 13 HM / 9 R

 
Posted : January 19, 2020 12:14 am
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