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crlisle
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HM here! Phew!


Vol. 36: 3rd -- R, 4th -- R
Vol. 37: R, HM, HM, SHM
Vol. 38: HM, HM, HM, HM
Vol. 39: SHM, RWC, RWC, HM
Vol. 40: HM, R, RWC, R
Vol. 41: R, HM, HM, HM
Vol. 42: R, RWC, RWC, RWC

Amateur published stories:
"The Army Ration That Saved the Earth" in For Glory and Honor, LTUE 2026 anthology
"The Tell-Tale Cricket" in The Murderbugs Anthololgy
"Follow the Pretrons" in Martian Magazine, and a Critters Award
"Eyes and Hands" in Galaxy's Edge Magazine
"The Last Dance" in Parliament of Wizards, LTUE anthology
"My Ten Cents" in Sci Fi Lampoon
Professional Publication:
"Invasion" in Daily Science Fiction

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 4:14 pm
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Yelena
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HM for me. Better than an R but I really gave this one my all. 


V36:Q3 HM V37: Q3 R, Q4 SHM V38: R,HM, F, HM V39: HM, SHM, SHM, SHM V40: SF, RWC, ?

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 4:16 pm
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DoctorJest
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silverhm

So, a SHM for me also! I really thought I'd hit a tonal bum note with my entry for Q2, so this is better than I was expecting to get. smiley  


DQ:0 / R:0 / RWC:3 / HM:15 / SHM:7 / SF:1 / F:1

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 4:22 pm
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MarathonCoder
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rejection It wasn't unexpected since I broke a rule I didn't understand at the time.  Onward and upward.  Best of luck to everyone else!


V38: HM, R, R, HM
V39: RWC, HM, RWC, HM
V40: RWC, HM, SHM, R
V41: R, RWC, R, R
V42: RWC, RWC, RWC, RWC
V43: P

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 4:32 pm
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Cray Dimensional
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@doctorjest congratulations 


Small steps add up to miles.
5 R, 5 RWC, 9 HM, 1 SHM
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 4:32 pm
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N.V. Haskell
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silverhm  

SHM for me too! Congrats to everyone! I am really curious, and hopeful, to see if the semi and finalists are active members of this group. With all of the talent here I would be surprised if there aren't a couple amongst us. 


‘Writing is like giving yourself homework, really hard homework, everyday for the rest of your life. You want glamour? Throw glitter at the computer screen.' - Ketrina Monroe
'The War Within' Deep Magic Volume 73 https://deepmagic.co
'Spirit Talk' in The Last Line Issue 7 Winter
'The Mystical Farrago' Writers of the Future, Volume 38
'The Dying Book' Misfits of Magic Anthology
'Whatever Lola Wants' Murderbirds Anthology
'Inspirational Theurgist' Of Wizards and Wolves Anthology for the David Farland memorial fund
'Beneath the Glass Dark' From the Depths Anthology
'A Life of Color' Metaphorosis magazine 8/1/2023
'A Murmuring Darkness' Strange Horizons 9/18/2023
'Out There With Them' Robotic Ambitions-Apex publishing
'The Skykeeper's Daughter' Dragon Gems Winter 2024 Anthology --this story was written in 24 hours at the WoTF workshop.
Temporary Tales of Magic and Hope -- A Short Story Collection of New and Previously Published works.
'A Widow's Word' Murderbugs Anthology
'Whitechapel' The Vampire Survival Guide Anthology
Coming Soon The Malice of Moons and Mages, Book 1 of The Broken Bonds of Magic Series
V37- R, HM, SHM, HM
V38- HM, SHM, Winner (3rd place)

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 4:34 pm
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Cray Dimensional
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As I expected rejection  . I learned a lot during 3RD quarter. Hoping to break in then.


Small steps add up to miles.
5 R, 5 RWC, 9 HM, 1 SHM
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 4:35 pm
PenMark
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I got another SHM! I really loved the idea for this story but didn't feel confident about how it came out on the page, so this was a really lovely and invigorating surprise.


V37: -, -, R, SHM
V38: R, SHM, HM, HM
V39: SHM, HM, HM, ?

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 4:37 pm
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Cray Dimensional
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@nvhaskell congratulations 


Small steps add up to miles.
5 R, 5 RWC, 9 HM, 1 SHM
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 4:39 pm
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Cray Dimensional
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@chwalter me too. We learn from mistakes.


Small steps add up to miles.
5 R, 5 RWC, 9 HM, 1 SHM
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 4:41 pm
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@rschibler  Silver is great, it's the top of the heap, and then Dave is forced to whittle them down. Sorry about that, Becky, but it was a solid story and I had high hopes for you. Next time!


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Posted : June 25, 2021 4:42 pm
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Posted by: @crlisle

HM here! Phew!

Consistency is key, Candice. You've proven you have good technical mastery when you hit HM and above more than once. From there, you just need your great idea Dave has never seen before. Or better yet, that tear-jerker that makes him wipe his eyes and say, "How in the world did she do that to me?" Next time!


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Posted : June 25, 2021 4:44 pm
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Posted by: @doctorjest

silverhm

So, a SHM for me also! I really thought I'd hit a tonal bum note with my entry for Q2, so this is better than I was expecting to get. smiley  

That's still at the top of the heap, Dr. Jest. Good job! Next quarter is yours! 


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Posted : June 25, 2021 4:46 pm
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N.V. Haskell
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@craydimensional thank you! Hang in there. I've been taking Dave's 318 class since January and I really think it helped me. Let me know if you would ever like to do a critique exchange. I definitely struggle with getting other writer's eyes on my work before I submit, but I know it would benefit my writing in big ways.


‘Writing is like giving yourself homework, really hard homework, everyday for the rest of your life. You want glamour? Throw glitter at the computer screen.' - Ketrina Monroe
'The War Within' Deep Magic Volume 73 https://deepmagic.co
'Spirit Talk' in The Last Line Issue 7 Winter
'The Mystical Farrago' Writers of the Future, Volume 38
'The Dying Book' Misfits of Magic Anthology
'Whatever Lola Wants' Murderbirds Anthology
'Inspirational Theurgist' Of Wizards and Wolves Anthology for the David Farland memorial fund
'Beneath the Glass Dark' From the Depths Anthology
'A Life of Color' Metaphorosis magazine 8/1/2023
'A Murmuring Darkness' Strange Horizons 9/18/2023
'Out There With Them' Robotic Ambitions-Apex publishing
'The Skykeeper's Daughter' Dragon Gems Winter 2024 Anthology --this story was written in 24 hours at the WoTF workshop.
Temporary Tales of Magic and Hope -- A Short Story Collection of New and Previously Published works.
'A Widow's Word' Murderbugs Anthology
'Whitechapel' The Vampire Survival Guide Anthology
Coming Soon The Malice of Moons and Mages, Book 1 of The Broken Bonds of Magic Series
V37- R, HM, SHM, HM
V38- HM, SHM, Winner (3rd place)

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 4:47 pm
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Posted by: @nvhaskell

silverhm  

SHM for me too! Congrats to everyone! I am really curious, and hopeful, to see if the semi and finalists are active members of this group. With all of the talent here I would be surprised if there aren't a couple amongst us. 

You've hit that upper tier a couple of times now, NV. And you just sold to Deep Magic. I'd say you're very close to winning this contest! Keep swinging!

 


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Posted : June 25, 2021 4:49 pm
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RETreasure
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@wulfmoon Thank you! I know competition has gotten steeper, and Dave has to narrow it down to 8. Onwards! I have (way too much) hope for my Q3, so I'm not crushed.


V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Published Finalist Volume 38
Pro’d out Q4V39
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Posted : June 25, 2021 4:50 pm
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Posted by: @craydimensional

As I expected rejection  . I learned a lot during 3RD quarter. Hoping to break in then.

It does suck, but we all start somewhere, Cray. Usually from the bottom, and work our way up. The more we learn, the more we practice, the better we get. Stay the course. There's a good reward for your hard work. All the beast!

Wulf Moon


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Posted : June 25, 2021 4:52 pm
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Cray Dimensional
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@nvhaskell I will probably take you up on that for Q4, but I’m not ready yet. Got a lot crits for Q3. I am hoping that one breaks through to HM at least.


Small steps add up to miles.
5 R, 5 RWC, 9 HM, 1 SHM
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 4:52 pm
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N.V. Haskell
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@wulfmoon Thank you for the encouragement! There are so many good writers here and, like @RETreasure said, the competition is steep. I am optimistic about my Q3 submission and just started my Q4 editing so crossing my fingers and doing the work in the meantime.


‘Writing is like giving yourself homework, really hard homework, everyday for the rest of your life. You want glamour? Throw glitter at the computer screen.' - Ketrina Monroe
'The War Within' Deep Magic Volume 73 https://deepmagic.co
'Spirit Talk' in The Last Line Issue 7 Winter
'The Mystical Farrago' Writers of the Future, Volume 38
'The Dying Book' Misfits of Magic Anthology
'Whatever Lola Wants' Murderbirds Anthology
'Inspirational Theurgist' Of Wizards and Wolves Anthology for the David Farland memorial fund
'Beneath the Glass Dark' From the Depths Anthology
'A Life of Color' Metaphorosis magazine 8/1/2023
'A Murmuring Darkness' Strange Horizons 9/18/2023
'Out There With Them' Robotic Ambitions-Apex publishing
'The Skykeeper's Daughter' Dragon Gems Winter 2024 Anthology --this story was written in 24 hours at the WoTF workshop.
Temporary Tales of Magic and Hope -- A Short Story Collection of New and Previously Published works.
'A Widow's Word' Murderbugs Anthology
'Whitechapel' The Vampire Survival Guide Anthology
Coming Soon The Malice of Moons and Mages, Book 1 of The Broken Bonds of Magic Series
V37- R, HM, SHM, HM
V38- HM, SHM, Winner (3rd place)

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 4:57 pm
N.V. Haskell
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@craydimensional Please do! Your hard work will pay off.


‘Writing is like giving yourself homework, really hard homework, everyday for the rest of your life. You want glamour? Throw glitter at the computer screen.' - Ketrina Monroe
'The War Within' Deep Magic Volume 73 https://deepmagic.co
'Spirit Talk' in The Last Line Issue 7 Winter
'The Mystical Farrago' Writers of the Future, Volume 38
'The Dying Book' Misfits of Magic Anthology
'Whatever Lola Wants' Murderbirds Anthology
'Inspirational Theurgist' Of Wizards and Wolves Anthology for the David Farland memorial fund
'Beneath the Glass Dark' From the Depths Anthology
'A Life of Color' Metaphorosis magazine 8/1/2023
'A Murmuring Darkness' Strange Horizons 9/18/2023
'Out There With Them' Robotic Ambitions-Apex publishing
'The Skykeeper's Daughter' Dragon Gems Winter 2024 Anthology --this story was written in 24 hours at the WoTF workshop.
Temporary Tales of Magic and Hope -- A Short Story Collection of New and Previously Published works.
'A Widow's Word' Murderbugs Anthology
'Whitechapel' The Vampire Survival Guide Anthology
Coming Soon The Malice of Moons and Mages, Book 1 of The Broken Bonds of Magic Series
V37- R, HM, SHM, HM
V38- HM, SHM, Winner (3rd place)

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 4:58 pm
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Cray Dimensional
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@wulfmoon I’m not that upset. During Q3 I found Super Secrets, WoTF Forum, got a lot of advice from other WoTF present and alumni. After that, I knew I made critical mistakes on Q2. But mistakes are things to learn from.


Small steps add up to miles.
5 R, 5 RWC, 9 HM, 1 SHM
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 5:01 pm
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Dragonchef
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Silver HM for me this time too. Better than I thought.

silverhm


3 HMs
6 SHMs
Umpteen Rs
Still hoping and working toward better -
One of these days, Alice . . . POW! We're going to the moon!

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 5:14 pm
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czing
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Congrats on all the Silvers and HMs and even the rejections mean you are sending your work out in the world!

I got a silverhm  


v36 Q1, Q3 - HM; Q4 - R
v37 Q1 - R; Q2 - SHM; Q4 - HM
v38 Q1 - HM; Q2 - SHM; Q3 - HM; Q4 - HM
v39 Q1 - SHM; Q3 - HM; Q4 -RWC
v40 Q1, Q2 - HM; Q3 - Pending

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 5:30 pm
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crlisle
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@wulfmoon I do have great idea for 3r qtr. But I need to learn how to make an editor cry. Which of your books or classes teaches how to do this? 


Vol. 36: 3rd -- R, 4th -- R
Vol. 37: R, HM, HM, SHM
Vol. 38: HM, HM, HM, HM
Vol. 39: SHM, RWC, RWC, HM
Vol. 40: HM, R, RWC, R
Vol. 41: R, HM, HM, HM
Vol. 42: R, RWC, RWC, RWC

Amateur published stories:
"The Army Ration That Saved the Earth" in For Glory and Honor, LTUE 2026 anthology
"The Tell-Tale Cricket" in The Murderbugs Anthololgy
"Follow the Pretrons" in Martian Magazine, and a Critters Award
"Eyes and Hands" in Galaxy's Edge Magazine
"The Last Dance" in Parliament of Wizards, LTUE anthology
"My Ten Cents" in Sci Fi Lampoon
Professional Publication:
"Invasion" in Daily Science Fiction

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 5:31 pm
Pat Ezell
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  silverhm SHM for me! It's my first, so I'm pretty stoked about it. Good luck to everyone who is still twitching.

BTW, how do I add the awesome "I got a.." emoji? 

Updated - thanks for the emoji lesson! It feels official now.


This post was modified 5 years ago 3 times by Pat Ezell

The murky past: 2 HM, 2 R
V38: HM, SHM, R (arrgggh!), HM
V39: P

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 5:32 pm
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SHM for me! I'm genuinely shocked, because I recently watched an interview where Dave Farland says he like the main characters to be introduced by page 2 and I didn't get to mine until page 5. I've sinced cut the flab from my intro, and now that I know I'm on the right track, I'm considering trying my luck and re-submitting the story. Is this bad taste? 

As it is, I feel like I'm on top of the world Smile


 
Posted : June 25, 2021 5:41 pm
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Cray Dimensional
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@czing congratulations 


Small steps add up to miles.
5 R, 5 RWC, 9 HM, 1 SHM
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 5:45 pm
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Posted by: @patezell

SHM for me! It's my first, so I'm pretty stoked about it. Good luck to everyone who is still twitching.

BTW, how do I add the awesome "I got a.." emoji? 

Click the Emoji icon in the lower right: 

image

It may take a few seconds, but it'll open up the list of available emojis, including the WotF custom ones.


DQ:0 / R:0 / RWC:3 / HM:15 / SHM:7 / SF:1 / F:1

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 5:49 pm
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I’m pleasantly surprised to have gotten another HM this quarter, considering that I didn’t submit the story I wanted to for Q2 as it wasn’t ready in time. 

It really is important to keep submitting! I’m much more optimistic for my Q3, so we’ll see how it goes. 

Congrats and fingers crossed for everyone else here on the forum.


v37: Q3HM
v38: Q1R, Q2HM, Q3HM
v39: Q2HM, Q3HM, Q4HM
v40: Q1 In Progress
I'm available for critique exchanges via PM. Note: I will not be available for exchanges from 12/17/22-1/1/23.

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 6:12 pm
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Posted by: @crlisle

@wulfmoon I do have great idea for 3r qtr. But I need to learn how to make an editor cry. Which of your books or classes teaches how to do this? 

Candice, that's in my SUPER SECRETS Workshop "Nail Your Opening" with the bonus module "Heart's Desire and the Reader/Hero Bond." It's the new addition after doing the benefit workshop for DreamForge Anvil magazine. And yes, if you can make an editor cry, you've won. It's very hard to do.


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"Super-Duper Moongirl and the Amazing Moon Dawdler" won Best SFF Story of 2019! Read it in Writers of the Future, Vol. 35. Order HERE!
Need writing help? My award-winning SUPER SECRETS articles are FREE in DreamForge.
IT’S HERE! Many have begged me to publish the Super Secrets of Writing. How to Write a Howling Good Story is now a #1 BESTSELLING BOOK! Get yours at your favorite retailer HERE!

 
Posted : June 25, 2021 6:17 pm
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