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crlisle
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I have submitted for Q2, volume 40. Whoohoo! So excited!!

I love that Kary and Jody will see my story!! (Anonymously, of course, but still exciting)

 

Vol. 36: 3rd -- R, 4th -- R
Vol. 37: R, HM, HM, SHM
Vol. 38: HM, HM, HM, HM
Vol. 39: SHM, RWC, RWC, HM
Vol. 40: HM, R, RWC, R
Vol. 41: R, HM, HM, HM
Vol. 42: 1st -- pending

Amateur published stories:
"The Army Ration That Saved the Earth" -- Accepted for publication, waiting for contract
"The Tell-Tale Cricket" in The Murderbugs Anthololgy
"Follow the Pretrons" in Martian Magazine, and a Critters Award
"Eyes and Hands" in Galaxy's Edge Magazine
"The Last Dance" in Parliament of Wizards, LTUE anthology
"My Ten Cents" in Sci Fi Lampoon
Professional Publication:
"Invasion" in Daily Science Fiction

 
Posted : February 24, 2023 6:35 am
MountainSpud
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Congrats & best of fortunes, @crlisle

Website: https://www.jeschleicher.com/
Blog: https://www.jeschleicher.com/dopaminesdelight
V40: Q1 3rd Place Winner ("Squiddy")
V39: SHM, HM, HM, HM
V38: HM, SHM, HM, HM
V37: R, R, HM, HM
V36: R

 
Posted : February 24, 2023 7:12 am
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@pegeen and @jeschleicher Ooooh man yesss! Every story starts as a vivid scene in my dreamy head, most often inspired by a song, but sometimes nature and the rest of the story is a matter of figuring out how they got there and were they go from there. I usually write that scene out first then go back and do the rest chronologically. Love to hear I'm not the only one!!

PS. I've determined INFPs are basically imaginative cats. Introverted, approach humans for affection and snax, spend the rest of the day staring out the window and chittering nonsense at birds.

V39 - Q2 HM, Q3 SHM, Q4 HM
V40 - Q1 SHM, Q2 HM. Q3 SHM Q4 HM
V41 - Q1 Crafting

 
Posted : February 26, 2023 7:03 pm
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Pegeen
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@time Thanks. I may take you up on your kind offer, after I do more work.  The problem storynow will be for Q3. I'm tweaking an old story for Q2 and making good progress.

~~ Pegeen ~~
Be soft. Do not let the world make you hard. Do not let pain make you hate. Do not let the bitterness steal your sweetness. Take pride that even though the rest of the world may disagree, you still believe it to be a beautiful place. Kurt Vonnegut, Jr. Writer
V40 - Q1 RWC, Q2 HM,

 
Posted : February 26, 2023 8:13 pm
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Todd Jones
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My Q2 story is done, I think. toast

I just printed it for my wife to read. popcorn  

I'll let it set for a couple days and then give it re-read. deadhorse  

My Mike Resnick contest submission needs some attention now. typing

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford

V42: WIP
V41: RWC (Resubmitted "HM"), HM, RWC, Finalist (Resubmitted "RWC")
V40: HM, HM, R, HM
V39: SHM, HM, Semi-finalist, HM (Resubmitted "HM")
V38: ---HM (Resubmitted "R")
V37: -R--

 
Posted : March 1, 2023 1:20 pm
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MountainSpud
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Posted by: @toddjones

My Q2 story is done, I think. toast

I just printed it for my wife to read. popcorn  

 

 

Woot! Woot!

 

My wife is my trusted, first-reader, too, and I must say, she's gotten frank. She started her last feedback with "If I wasn't your wife, I'd have stopped reading." laughing laughing Cry  

 

Website: https://www.jeschleicher.com/
Blog: https://www.jeschleicher.com/dopaminesdelight
V40: Q1 3rd Place Winner ("Squiddy")
V39: SHM, HM, HM, HM
V38: HM, SHM, HM, HM
V37: R, R, HM, HM
V36: R

 
Posted : March 1, 2023 1:43 pm
James (Ease)
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Posted by: @jeschleicher

Posted by: @toddjones

My Q2 story is done, I think. toast

I just printed it for my wife to read. popcorn  

 

 

Woot! Woot!

 

My wife is my trusted, first-reader, too, and I must say, she's gotten frank. She started her last feedback with "If I wasn't your wife, I'd have stopped reading." laughing laughing Cry  

 

 

Hey, for my Q1 submission (which was my favorite short story I'd written at the time), my wife said "Obviously I love everything you write, but I hate this."

We talked at length about why, I revised a lot, she reread it and... "Nope, I still hate all of it."

hilarious

Tough to hear, but at least she's honest! Better than just being told what they think you want to hear!

 

VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com
Kindle Vella - Ashes to Ashes, Earth to Kaybee

 
Posted : March 1, 2023 3:04 pm
Todd Jones
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Posted by: @jeschleicher

My wife is my trusted, first-reader, too, and I must say, she's gotten frank. She started her last feedback with "If I wasn't your wife, I'd have stopped reading." laughing laughing Cry   

I understand. 

I have some polishing to do on the story after my wife's advice.  Not a lot, but some smoothing out.  

 

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford

V42: WIP
V41: RWC (Resubmitted "HM"), HM, RWC, Finalist (Resubmitted "RWC")
V40: HM, HM, R, HM
V39: SHM, HM, Semi-finalist, HM (Resubmitted "HM")
V38: ---HM (Resubmitted "R")
V37: -R--

 
Posted : March 1, 2023 5:42 pm
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Posted by: @ease

Hey, for my Q1 submission (which was my favorite short story I'd written at the time), my wife said "Obviously I love everything you write, but I hate this."

We talked at length about why, I revised a lot, she reread it and... "Nope, I still hate all of it."

hilarious

Tough to hear, but at least she's honest! Better than just being told what they think you want to hear!

Glad to know others are experiencing the same as me.

A bit different for me, my wife feels my Q1 submission is the best I've written. Whereas I feel my semi-finalist achievement piece is my best work. After I made the updates from receiving a review from WotF, of course.

I would love to tell my wife she was right rolleyes by having my Q1 do better than semi-finalist. Seriously, I would gladly tell her she was right.  Please be right, honey. Fingers crossed.   

 

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford

V42: WIP
V41: RWC (Resubmitted "HM"), HM, RWC, Finalist (Resubmitted "RWC")
V40: HM, HM, R, HM
V39: SHM, HM, Semi-finalist, HM (Resubmitted "HM")
V38: ---HM (Resubmitted "R")
V37: -R--

 
Posted : March 1, 2023 5:50 pm
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Cray Dimensional
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I’m in for Q2 v40. Now I have to figure out how to not twitch on my Q1 v40 entry. Guess I should start brainstorming Q3 v40.

typing

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : HM, RWC, R, HM
V41 : RWC, R, R, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology
"Experimenting with the Dance of Death" in Love is Complicated LUW Romance Anthology.

 
Posted : March 4, 2023 12:25 pm
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MountainSpud
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Posted by: @Anonymous

I’m in for Q2 v40.

salute

Website: https://www.jeschleicher.com/
Blog: https://www.jeschleicher.com/dopaminesdelight
V40: Q1 3rd Place Winner ("Squiddy")
V39: SHM, HM, HM, HM
V38: HM, SHM, HM, HM
V37: R, R, HM, HM
V36: R

 
Posted : March 5, 2023 12:45 pm
Physa/ Guthington/ Amy
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And my Q2 is submitted. Good luck everyone! nightcap Scared Nerd Wink Party  

WOTF results:
Vol 41: Q1 HM, Q2 HM, Q4 HM
running totals to date:
WOTF: 6 Rs, 3 RWCs. 8 HMs
IOTF: 4 Rs, 3 HMs
Check out my new website: https://www.amyrwethingtonwriterofspeculativeworlds.com/
According to Winston Churchill, "success is going from failure to failure with enthusiasm"
Somehow I lost my Guthington profile, but it's me. Amy Wethington = Guthington = Physa

 
Posted : March 8, 2023 5:10 am
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MountainSpud
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  salute ,@physa!

Website: https://www.jeschleicher.com/
Blog: https://www.jeschleicher.com/dopaminesdelight
V40: Q1 3rd Place Winner ("Squiddy")
V39: SHM, HM, HM, HM
V38: HM, SHM, HM, HM
V37: R, R, HM, HM
V36: R

 
Posted : March 8, 2023 8:38 am
K. Z. Richards
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 I’m also in for Q2. grinning  

V39: - - - HM
V40: SHM, HM, SHM, HM
V41: HM, SHM, SHM, F
V42: WIP

Stories published in Triangulation, Neo-opsis Science Fiction Magazine, Flash Fiction Magazine, and others.
https://kzrichards.com

 
Posted : March 10, 2023 5:11 am
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MountainSpud
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Posted by: @kz_richards

 I’m also in for Q2. grinning  

 

Yay! It's a lovely, emotionally powerful story!

 

Website: https://www.jeschleicher.com/
Blog: https://www.jeschleicher.com/dopaminesdelight
V40: Q1 3rd Place Winner ("Squiddy")
V39: SHM, HM, HM, HM
V38: HM, SHM, HM, HM
V37: R, R, HM, HM
V36: R

 
Posted : March 10, 2023 7:45 am
K. Z. Richards
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@jeschleicher oh thank you so much!

V39: - - - HM
V40: SHM, HM, SHM, HM
V41: HM, SHM, SHM, F
V42: WIP

Stories published in Triangulation, Neo-opsis Science Fiction Magazine, Flash Fiction Magazine, and others.
https://kzrichards.com

 
Posted : March 10, 2023 8:06 am
catherine
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@elainemidcoh WotF as a market doesn't favor political stories. I think it would be a harder sell if it gets into real-world politics at all.

Author of MG Fantasy Adventures:
Gold Dust
Phoenix Down
Author of an English/Japanese bilingual fantasy for 4-6 year-olds:
Ray and Mia's Adventure
I'm a professional copy editor and also a trained mime. Please don't hold either of these against me.
V37 Q2 HM
V39 Q2 HM, Q3 SHM, Q4 HM
V40 Q1 HM, Q2 HM, Q3 RWC, Q4 HM
V41 Q1 HM
https://catherineweaverauthor.com/

 
Posted : March 11, 2023 3:55 pm
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catherine
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And I'm in for Q2!

  Smile  

Author of MG Fantasy Adventures:
Gold Dust
Phoenix Down
Author of an English/Japanese bilingual fantasy for 4-6 year-olds:
Ray and Mia's Adventure
I'm a professional copy editor and also a trained mime. Please don't hold either of these against me.
V37 Q2 HM
V39 Q2 HM, Q3 SHM, Q4 HM
V40 Q1 HM, Q2 HM, Q3 RWC, Q4 HM
V41 Q1 HM
https://catherineweaverauthor.com/

 
Posted : March 11, 2023 8:42 pm
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Cray Dimensional
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@cweaver can't wait to see your story in print.

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : HM, RWC, R, HM
V41 : RWC, R, R, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology
"Experimenting with the Dance of Death" in Love is Complicated LUW Romance Anthology.

 
Posted : March 12, 2023 5:58 am
catherine
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@craydimensional Inlove Thank you! I look forward to sharing a TOC with you some day. hearts

Author of MG Fantasy Adventures:
Gold Dust
Phoenix Down
Author of an English/Japanese bilingual fantasy for 4-6 year-olds:
Ray and Mia's Adventure
I'm a professional copy editor and also a trained mime. Please don't hold either of these against me.
V37 Q2 HM
V39 Q2 HM, Q3 SHM, Q4 HM
V40 Q1 HM, Q2 HM, Q3 RWC, Q4 HM
V41 Q1 HM
https://catherineweaverauthor.com/

 
Posted : March 12, 2023 10:18 am
Cray Dimensional
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@cweaver Thank you. Maybe volume 40 ?

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : HM, RWC, R, HM
V41 : RWC, R, R, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology
"Experimenting with the Dance of Death" in Love is Complicated LUW Romance Anthology.

 
Posted : March 12, 2023 3:15 pm
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empressed
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@jeschleicher right there with you all. My husband's my last reader because it needs to be clear for him. Otherwise, I get comments like, "this sucks!" The good news is, his frankness helped. Once I got over it. LOL

Victoria Dixon
Author of Mourn Their Courage
a 2010 Sandy Writing Contest Finalist
A Tribble Ate My Lunch: a Star Trek Cookbook (unpublished)
R=24
HM= 8
SHM=4
Finalist=1

 
Posted : March 15, 2023 5:11 am
K. Z. Richards
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@empressed Where do all these opinionated spouses come from? My husband reads all my stories, and his reaction is exactly the same every time. He says, “It’s good,” and nothing else. No compliments, suggestions, questions, or anything. Just those two words. I’m tempted to write something really terrible one day and see if his response changes. ?

V39: - - - HM
V40: SHM, HM, SHM, HM
V41: HM, SHM, SHM, F
V42: WIP

Stories published in Triangulation, Neo-opsis Science Fiction Magazine, Flash Fiction Magazine, and others.
https://kzrichards.com

 
Posted : March 15, 2023 5:50 am
Todd Jones
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@kz_richards My wife used to do the same, but that's changed over the last year. She's not a writer, so I give her a couple things to focus on. Are there any clunky sentences? Is the flow/pace of the story good? Would you like more or less info in areas to slow or speed up the story?

She's a great first reader and has helped with pointing out areas that are slow in the story.  I don't always see those, since I'm cutting and pasting all the time to move stuff around.

There are people in the forum willing to trade reviews. Take advantage of the forum.

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford

V42: WIP
V41: RWC (Resubmitted "HM"), HM, RWC, Finalist (Resubmitted "RWC")
V40: HM, HM, R, HM
V39: SHM, HM, Semi-finalist, HM (Resubmitted "HM")
V38: ---HM (Resubmitted "R")
V37: -R--

 
Posted : March 15, 2023 9:04 am
Todd Jones
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Posted by: @toddjones

My Q2 story is done, I think. toast

Okay, after a few suggestions to help smooth out the story, I'm giving it a final read and planning on submitting tomorrow.

I'm ranking this one in the top 3 stories of mine. We will see what the WotF judges think.  Crossing my fingers.

 

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford

V42: WIP
V41: RWC (Resubmitted "HM"), HM, RWC, Finalist (Resubmitted "RWC")
V40: HM, HM, R, HM
V39: SHM, HM, Semi-finalist, HM (Resubmitted "HM")
V38: ---HM (Resubmitted "R")
V37: -R--

 
Posted : March 15, 2023 9:07 am
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@toddjones I’ve had a few people from the forum read my stories, and it’s been so helpful!

V39: - - - HM
V40: SHM, HM, SHM, HM
V41: HM, SHM, SHM, F
V42: WIP

Stories published in Triangulation, Neo-opsis Science Fiction Magazine, Flash Fiction Magazine, and others.
https://kzrichards.com

 
Posted : March 15, 2023 2:40 pm
Cray Dimensional
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Posted by: @kz_richards

@empressed Where do all these opinionated spouses come from? My husband reads all my stories, and his reaction is exactly the same every time. He says, “It’s good,” and nothing else. No compliments, suggestions, questions, or anything. Just those two words. I’m tempted to write something really terrible one day and see if his response changes. ?

My husband is my last reader. Sometimes I wonder if he just likes every thing.

 

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : HM, RWC, R, HM
V41 : RWC, R, R, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology
"Experimenting with the Dance of Death" in Love is Complicated LUW Romance Anthology.

 
Posted : March 15, 2023 4:37 pm
Cray Dimensional
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@kz_richards I lucked out with having people on forum comment. I think the Super Secrets thread has some wonderful advice.

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : HM, RWC, R, HM
V41 : RWC, R, R, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology
"Experimenting with the Dance of Death" in Love is Complicated LUW Romance Anthology.

 
Posted : March 15, 2023 4:39 pm
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MountainSpud
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Posted by: @Anonymous

@kz_richards I lucked out with having people on forum comment. I think the Super Secrets thread has some wonderful advice.

Hear, hear! Much gratitude for this community and contest. 

 

Website: https://www.jeschleicher.com/
Blog: https://www.jeschleicher.com/dopaminesdelight
V40: Q1 3rd Place Winner ("Squiddy")
V39: SHM, HM, HM, HM
V38: HM, SHM, HM, HM
V37: R, R, HM, HM
V36: R

 
Posted : March 16, 2023 8:08 am
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MountainSpud
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I'm in and feeling good about this one.

Website: https://www.jeschleicher.com/
Blog: https://www.jeschleicher.com/dopaminesdelight
V40: Q1 3rd Place Winner ("Squiddy")
V39: SHM, HM, HM, HM
V38: HM, SHM, HM, HM
V37: R, R, HM, HM
V36: R

 
Posted : March 16, 2023 9:19 am
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