Hi All,
I've got a 7,300-word story for Q3 that is in the final editing stages. Looking for overall impressions, flow, and any obvious continuity errors I missed. Happy to read and critique in return either now or nearer the submission date. (@clfors is in my writing group, so she's already read it).
Thanks!
V33- SF
V38- SHM, HM
V39- HM,R
V40- HM
V41- Q2-SHM, Q3-SHM, Q4-SHM
I can take a quick look if you still need another set of eyes.
my comments sent via PM!
thanks for letting me take a look, really enjoyed the tale ?
Gideon
"...your motivations for wanting to write are probably complex. You may have a few great passions, you may want to be rich and famous, and you may need therapy."
- Dave Farland, Million Dollar Outlines
Writers of the Future:
2025 Q1: P Q2: WIP Q3: TBD Q4: TBD
2024 Q1: F Q2: HM Q3:SHM Q4: SHM
2023 Q1: RWC Q2: SHM Q3: SHM Q4: R
2022 Q4: R
Submissions to other markets:
2024: 45 submitted 8 acceptances
2023: 74 submitted 13 acceptances
2022: 22 submitted 1 acceptance
Hi @wahlquistj, I'm happy to take a look. I'm still hammering out my story (reworking an old HM that I think has more potential) but am hoping to have something to send out next week, so would welcome a swap. Feel free to send my way. 
F x1
SHM x4
HM x10
RWC x1
R Dozens
Thanks @bzelger and @adrian! I'm making a few tweaks based on @gideonpsmith's feedback (and critiquing his) and then I'll send it to you folks.
V33- SF
V38- SHM, HM
V39- HM,R
V40- HM
V41- Q2-SHM, Q3-SHM, Q4-SHM
@bzelger I sent out your copy through the messenger. Thank you so much everyone!
V33- SF
V38- SHM, HM
V39- HM,R
V40- HM
V41- Q2-SHM, Q3-SHM, Q4-SHM
