I want to give my Q3 entry (it got an HM) a good polish and improve it. It's a story I absolutely love that brings a smile to my face every time I read it. It makes me happy, so I feel I need to get it a more rigorous critique.
It's slightly less that 5500 words.
Honestly, I know it can be better, but I've hit the limit of what I can do without some feedback.
I'll happily give a critique in exchange.
Thank you.
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V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
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It'll probably be a week and a half before I can read it, but feel free to send it to me whenever you feel is most helpful; after you've edited based on other critiques or your current manuscript. I'm planning to work on my Q2 HM, so maybe that'll be a good one to swap!
35: - R R R | 36: R HM R R | 37: HM HM HM SHM | 38: HM HM HM HM | 39: HM HM HM SHM | 40: HM R SHM SHM | 41: R HM SHM R
5 SHM / 13 HM / 9 R
It'll probably be a week and a half before I can read it, but feel free to send it to me whenever you feel is most helpful; after you've edited based on other critiques or your current manuscript. I'm planning to work on my Q2 HM, so maybe that'll be a good one to swap!
Okay. I'll wait until I hear results and then make some adjustments.
Thank you.
Released novels, available for purchase: Troll Song and Forgotten Legends. More books are on the way, waiting only for cover art.
I’ll be doing it today.
V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Published Finalist Volume 38
Pro’d out Q4V39
www.rebeccaetreasure.com
Managing Editor, Apex Magazine
Sounds good.
Released novels, available for purchase: Troll Song and Forgotten Legends. More books are on the way, waiting only for cover art.
Sent you an email.
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My published works
Sent you an email.
You might want to try a private message, instead. The forum doesn't seem to be passing on E-Mails sent through it at the moment.
It'll be a while before I can hand the story to a third person, though. AlexH is the one that's currently working on a critique. After that I'll want some time for revisions, based on his input.
Released novels, available for purchase: Troll Song and Forgotten Legends. More books are on the way, waiting only for cover art.
Ah yes, forgot about the email wonkiness. PM sent.
v 29 : - HM - - | v 30 : - - - - | v 31 : - - - HM | v 32 : - HM - HM | v 33 : R HM R SHM | v 34 : SHM SHM HM R | v 35 : HM R R R | v 36 : - R R R | v 37 : - - - HM | v 38 : - - - HM | v 39 : HM - - R | v 40: - HM - SHM | v 41: R
My published works
I'm pretty much feeling like my story is ready for the contest once more, at this point. I just need to make some minor line edits. I'm also starting a new job in the next few days, so my time will be a bit short for potentially the next few weeks. Sorry.
Released novels, available for purchase: Troll Song and Forgotten Legends. More books are on the way, waiting only for cover art.
