I want to give my Q3 entry (it got an HM) a good polish and improve it. It's a story I absolutely love that brings a smile to my face every time I read it. It makes me happy, so I feel I need to get it a more rigorous critique.
It's slightly less that 5500 words.
Honestly, I know it can be better, but I've hit the limit of what I can do without some feedback.
I'll happily give a critique in exchange.
Thank you.
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V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
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It'll probably be a week and a half before I can read it, but feel free to send it to me whenever you feel is most helpful; after you've edited based on other critiques or your current manuscript. I'm planning to work on my Q2 HM, so maybe that'll be a good one to swap!
35: - R R R | 36: R HM R R | 37: HM HM HM SHM | 38: HM HM HM HM | 39: HM HM HM SHM | 40: HM R SHM SHM | 41: R HM SHM R | 42: HM R R HM | 43: R
5 SHM / 15 HM / 12 R
It'll probably be a week and a half before I can read it, but feel free to send it to me whenever you feel is most helpful; after you've edited based on other critiques or your current manuscript. I'm planning to work on my Q2 HM, so maybe that'll be a good one to swap!
Okay. I'll wait until I hear results and then make some adjustments.
Thank you.
Released novels, available for purchase: Troll Song and Forgotten Legends. More books are on the way, waiting only for cover art.
I’ll be doing it today.
V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Published Finalist Volume 38
Pro’d out Q4V39
www.rebeccaetreasure.com
Managing Editor, Apex Magazine
Sounds good.
Released novels, available for purchase: Troll Song and Forgotten Legends. More books are on the way, waiting only for cover art.
Sent you an email.
You might want to try a private message, instead. The forum doesn't seem to be passing on E-Mails sent through it at the moment.
It'll be a while before I can hand the story to a third person, though. AlexH is the one that's currently working on a critique. After that I'll want some time for revisions, based on his input.
Released novels, available for purchase: Troll Song and Forgotten Legends. More books are on the way, waiting only for cover art.
I'm pretty much feeling like my story is ready for the contest once more, at this point. I just need to make some minor line edits. I'm also starting a new job in the next few days, so my time will be a bit short for potentially the next few weeks. Sorry.
Released novels, available for purchase: Troll Song and Forgotten Legends. More books are on the way, waiting only for cover art.
