Hey fam,
Would any of you fine people be interested in looking something over for me? It's my first two chapters. They are polished, so it shouldn't be a difficult read. I'm mainly looking for general impressions.
- Do you find it interesting?
- Would you read further?
- What do you think the MC needs to achieve?
Those sort of things. Of course, I'd happily hear anything you cared to share.
I'll also look over something for you, should you need me to.
Feel free to PM me!
Thank you,
JT
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I'm happy to take a look pro bono!
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@writhmic Hey! Sorry for the delayed response! I'll drop it in your inbox. Thank you!
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Previous Submissions: Q2V40, Q3V41, Q1V42
Q2V42 Window: Submitted
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