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Cherrie
(@clfors)
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I’ve edited a silver honorable mention of mine for Q3 and I’m hoping for some critiques and I’m happy to do a swap! This one is Sci-fi about 9,500 words.

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Posted : May 9, 2023 5:16 pm
Malachi Nielson
(@m-norris)
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I would love to exchange critiques, although my story isn't even close to being done, so I'll have to reserve the right to give it to you later, once I've finished a draft. 

Imagine having stories that received silver honorable mentions though... frowny  

There's a reason my signature is empty... laughing  

 
Posted : May 10, 2023 1:28 pm
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Cherrie
(@clfors)
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@m-norris awesome! I’ll send it over and look forward to seeing yours! 

keep up the writing and submitting and your signature will fill up Smile

Volume 41 Q1 Illustrator Winner!
4x Finalist Illustrators
5x Semi finalist Illustrators
1x HM Illustrators
7x HM Writers
3x SHM Writers
https://clforsauthor.com
Author of the Primogenitor series: Cradle of Mars, Adaptation, Reunion, Schism: Available on Amazon under CL Fors

 
Posted : May 10, 2023 1:49 pm
Adrian
(@adrian)
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Hi @clfors, not sure if you're still looking for feedback, but I'm happy to take a look as well. I am working on my story still, but hoping to have something to exchange by early next week (an old HM that I'm trying to upgrade, as I see flaws but still really like the beginning of it).

F x1
SHM x4
HM x11
RWC x1
R Dozens

 
Posted : May 17, 2023 5:49 pm
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Cherrie
(@clfors)
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@adrian thank you for offering g to help! I got a lot of good feedback and have already polished it and submitted it for the quarter but I’d be happy to read for you when you’re ready.

Volume 41 Q1 Illustrator Winner!
4x Finalist Illustrators
5x Semi finalist Illustrators
1x HM Illustrators
7x HM Writers
3x SHM Writers
https://clforsauthor.com
Author of the Primogenitor series: Cradle of Mars, Adaptation, Reunion, Schism: Available on Amazon under CL Fors

 
Posted : May 19, 2023 10:10 am
Adrian
(@adrian)
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@clfors Great! Much appreciated. Smile

F x1
SHM x4
HM x11
RWC x1
R Dozens

 
Posted : May 19, 2023 10:25 am
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