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Cray Dimensional
(@craydimensional)
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hm  
A third HM for me.


Small steps add up to miles.
5 R, 5 RWC, 8 HM, 1 SHM
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 9:30 pm
Loretta T., J.E. Schleicher, CeciBlack and 14 people reacted
Wahlquistj
(@wahlquistj)
Posts: 82
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Honorable mention for me too- congrats to all the winners!


V33- SF
V38- SHM, HM
V39- HM,R
V40- HM
V41- Q2-SHM, Q3-SHM, Q4-SHM

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 9:34 pm
James (Ease), Loretta T., J.E. Schleicher and 14 people reacted
FolkLoremIpsum
(@folkloremipsum)
Posts: 64
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hm


Q3 V38 - F, Q 4 V38 - SHM
Q1 V39 - HM, Q2 V39 - HM, Q3 V39 SHM, Q4 V39 SHM

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 9:39 pm
Loretta T., J.E. Schleicher, CeciBlack and 13 people reacted
Beth Powers
(@bethpowers)
Posts: 175
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HM for me!

For this volume's submissions, I've been experimenting with revisions, and this is the second story to receive the same results as the first time I submitted it, so at least I'm consistent, I guess grinning  


Beth Powers
-----
Silver HM x 6
HM x 24
Entries x 72
-----
Collected Stories:
Sorcery & Widgets
Runes & Rivets

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 9:51 pm
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MarathonCoder
(@chwalter)
Posts: 139
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hm I'm happy.  This was a rewrite of a rejection.  I listened to Wulf extol the virtues of KYD and cut a subplot near the end that amused me greatly but didn't advance the story.  Best of luck to all who haven't heard, especially those under a gag order.


V38: HM, R, R, HM
V39: RWC, HM, RWC, HM
V40: RWC, HM, SHM, R
V41: R, RWC, R, R
V42: RWC, RWC, RWC, P

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 9:58 pm
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DoctorJest
(@doctorjest)
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silverhm

I'm pretty pleased, though of course, I'd have loved if it placed higher! Still hoping to pick up a SF one day, they seem very elusive...

I'm really looking forward to seeing if we have any finalists lurking around here now!


DQ:0 / R:0 / RWC:3 / HM:15 / SHM:7 / SF:1 / F:1

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 10:00 pm
Beth Powers, Mike Jack Stoumbos, Loretta T. and 18 people reacted
Cherrie
(@clfors)
Posts: 343
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@doctorjest congrats on the silver! That’s great!


Volume 41 Q1 Illustrator Winner!
4x Finalist Illustrators
5x Semi finalist Illustrators
1x HM Illustrators
7x HM Writers
3x SHM Writers
https://clforsauthor.com
Author of the Primogenitor series: Cradle of Mars, Adaptation, Reunion, Schism: Available on Amazon under CL Fors

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 10:04 pm
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Cherrie
(@clfors)
Posts: 343
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It’s nice to see so many honorable mentions in the forums! I know we hope to win but it is good to see so many of our stories getting read and acknowledged. Write on! 


Volume 41 Q1 Illustrator Winner!
4x Finalist Illustrators
5x Semi finalist Illustrators
1x HM Illustrators
7x HM Writers
3x SHM Writers
https://clforsauthor.com
Author of the Primogenitor series: Cradle of Mars, Adaptation, Reunion, Schism: Available on Amazon under CL Fors

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 10:06 pm
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Jason P. Crawford
(@amstard)
Posts: 84
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It's my very first! And on a story my little writing group called my best yet, so I'm thrilled!

But now the question: do I revise this one and resubmit, or do I keep writing new ones? Advice welcome!


Jason P. Crawford
Author of Urban Fantasy and Sci-Fi (for now!)
Finalist for 2024 Baen Fantasy Adventure Award
3rd Place Winner for 2025 Jim Baen Memorial Short Story Award

Q3 V31: HM Q2 V39: SHM Q2 V40: SHM Q2 V41: HM Q2 V42: RWC
Q3 V38: HM Q3 V39: SHM Q3 V40: SHM Q3 V41: HM Q3 V42: P
Q4 V38: R Q4 V39: SHM Q4 V40: SHM Q4 V41: RWC
Q1 V39: HM Q1 V40: RWC Q1 V41: SHM Q1 V42: SHM

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 10:18 pm
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DoctorJest
(@doctorjest)
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Posted by: @amstard
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It's my very first! And on a story my little writing group called my best yet, so I'm thrilled!

But now the question: do I revise this one and resubmit, or do I keep writing new ones? Advice welcome!

This is really personal preference. Some years, I enter mostly or entirely new stories, other times I've entered a mix. To date, my revised stories have always placed exactly where they did the first time, so it's hard for me to judge! But people have had luck with both approaches. 

My general preference is to submit new, if I have something, and to revise and resubmit a SHM or HM only if I have a clear, good idea about how I would make some specific improvement to it that I think is going to be enough to level the story up in some significant way.

(Or, also, if I just don't have anything--because if my stories have crashed and burned, I'd rather be in on a resub of a lightly edited and revised story than not entered at all! But in those cases, I'm still marginally more fond of fleshing out former flash fiction than fiddling with a former fictional foray.) 


DQ:0 / R:0 / RWC:3 / HM:15 / SHM:7 / SF:1 / F:1

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 10:30 pm
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LambentTyto
(@lambenttyto)
Posts: 54
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Congratulations to all of you guys, and anyone who gets some nice results back. Now that we're getting the results, I'll let the cat out of the bag. My story was written in the fashion of a folk tale with heavy influences from The One Thousand and One Arabian Nights. The narrative is also old in style with more "telling" elements rather than using sensory description. I thought it was pretty unique in that it allowed me to fit a lot of content, but it's far from "modern" for how stories are told today. Guess that's a good reason for a rejection. :p


- My destiny awaits! 🏆

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 10:30 pm
LambentTyto
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Posted by: @amstard

But now the question: do I revise this one and resubmit, or do I keep writing new ones? Advice welcome!

I did minor revision with an HM and got a SHM back a while ago. It's worth a shot, but don't get trapped in revision hell because that will prevent you from writing new words.


- My destiny awaits! 🏆

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 10:32 pm
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Henckel
(@henckel)
Posts: 465
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Posted by: @amstard
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It's my very first! And on a story my little writing group called my best yet, so I'm thrilled!

But now the question: do I revise this one and resubmit, or do I keep writing new ones? Advice welcome!

I prefer to let the dust settle for a few quarters. Then update and resub stories that I feel have a good shot at the top. 


WOTF Stats
(2014) V31 – R
(2018) V35 – HM
(2019) V36 – HM, SHM
(2020) V37 – R, HM, SHM, Finalist
(2021) V38 – SF, SHM, SHM, HM
(2022) V39 – HM, SHM, SHM, SHM
(2023) V40 - HM, SF, tba, tba

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 10:34 pm
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LCWhelchel
(@earthkeeper78)
Posts: 76
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silverhm

I tried resubmitting an earlier SHM after some reworking to see if I could get it over that hump, but it stayed pat and pulled another Silver for me. I'm just grateful it didn't backslide


"Trust is like a shop. Difficult to build, but surprisingly easy to ruin. But when it is strong and true, there are few things in this world that make you feel stronger."
HM - V37/Q4, V38/Q4, V39/Q1
SHM - V38/Q3

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 10:58 pm
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Ramya (Writhmic)
(@writhmic)
Posts: 114
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First time submitting here was an SHM!!  silverhm


V39: -- / SHM / SHM / RWC
V40: HM / SHM / SHM / SHM
V41: RWC / HM / SHM / --
V42: -- / SHM / P / WIP

A labor of love: www.starspunlit.org

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 11:18 pm
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pdblake
(@pdblake)
Posts: 546
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HM for a previous HM. 


R:6 RWC:1 HM:9 SHM:3
My Blog
Small Gods and Little Demons - Parsec Issue #10

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 11:40 pm
Scott_M_Sands
(@scott_m_sands)
Posts: 452
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hm

A HM for me. A little down about this one - was really hoping for progress. I thought this story might have got higher. I'd love to know the difference (for my personal stories) that would have made them reach higher results. Wouldn't we all. Ha, ha.
That's how it goes.

A hearty congrats to all who submitted, and all who placed!


"If writing is easy, you're doing it wrong." -Bryan Hutchinson
V36-37: R x6
V38: R, HM, R, HM
V39: HM, HM, HM, HM
V40: HM, HM, SHM, HM
V41: RWC, P

 
Posted : August 9, 2022 11:49 pm
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Feranox
(@brandoncase1235)
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finalist

I did not expect this bawdy little tale to make it so far. Congrats to the winners and all who entered!


 
Posted : August 10, 2022 12:30 am
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Henckel
(@henckel)
Posts: 465
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@scott_m_sands it was a great story, Scott!


WOTF Stats
(2014) V31 – R
(2018) V35 – HM
(2019) V36 – HM, SHM
(2020) V37 – R, HM, SHM, Finalist
(2021) V38 – SF, SHM, SHM, HM
(2022) V39 – HM, SHM, SHM, SHM
(2023) V40 - HM, SF, tba, tba

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 12:52 am
Henckel
(@henckel)
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Posted by: @brandoncase1235

finalist

I did not expect this bawdy little tale to make it so far. Congrats to the winners and all who entered!

Congratulations!!!!!!!!!


WOTF Stats
(2014) V31 – R
(2018) V35 – HM
(2019) V36 – HM, SHM
(2020) V37 – R, HM, SHM, Finalist
(2021) V38 – SF, SHM, SHM, HM
(2022) V39 – HM, SHM, SHM, SHM
(2023) V40 - HM, SF, tba, tba

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 12:53 am
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Henckel
(@henckel)
Posts: 465
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silverhm


WOTF Stats
(2014) V31 – R
(2018) V35 – HM
(2019) V36 – HM, SHM
(2020) V37 – R, HM, SHM, Finalist
(2021) V38 – SF, SHM, SHM, HM
(2022) V39 – HM, SHM, SHM, SHM
(2023) V40 - HM, SF, tba, tba

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 12:54 am
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David Hankins
(@lost_bard)
Posts: 445
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<Reads Kary's post that finalist calls are going out>

<Writes a funny little post about burning marshmallows while twitching>

<Giggles to self>

<At the EXACT moment of hitting 'add reply,' phone rings>

<Hollywood, CA>

<OMG-OMG-OMG>

...

<Twitches through ten days of enforced silence>

<Phone rings>

<Hollywood, CA>

<OMG-OMG-OMG>

...

I am pleased to announce that I am no longer eligible to submit to Writers of the Future.

3rd Place, Volume 39, 2nd Quarter

winner


Death and the Taxman, my WotF V39 winning story is now a novel! (Click Here >).
Death and the Dragon launches on Kickstarter August 27th. (Click Here >)
Subscribe to The Lost Bard's Letter at www.davidhankins.com and receive an exclusive novelette!

New Releases:
"The Missing Music in Milo Piper's Head" in Third Flatiron's Offshoots: Humanity Twigged
"To Catch a Foo Fighter" in DreamForge Magazine
"Milo Piper's Breakout Single that Ended the Rat War" in LTUE's Troubadours and Space Princesses anthology
"The Rise and Fall of Frankie's Patisserie" in Murderbugs anthology
"Felix and the Flamingo" in Escape Pod
"The Devil's Foot Locker" in Amazing Stories

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 2:15 am
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pdblake
(@pdblake)
Posts: 546
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@lost_bard Congratulations.


R:6 RWC:1 HM:9 SHM:3
My Blog
Small Gods and Little Demons - Parsec Issue #10

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 2:16 am
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Henckel
(@henckel)
Posts: 465
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@lost_bard congratulations!!!! That is amazing!!!!


WOTF Stats
(2014) V31 – R
(2018) V35 – HM
(2019) V36 – HM, SHM
(2020) V37 – R, HM, SHM, Finalist
(2021) V38 – SF, SHM, SHM, HM
(2022) V39 – HM, SHM, SHM, SHM
(2023) V40 - HM, SF, tba, tba

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 3:03 am
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Dustin Adams
(@tj_knight)
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Yo! Great for you Mr. Bard! That's truly awesome. I could see you putting in the work, so, well earned!


Career: 1x Win -- 2x NW-F -- 2x S-F -- 9x S-HM -- 11x HM -- 7x R
Like me: facebook/AuthorTJKnight

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 3:05 am
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Dustin Adams
(@tj_knight)
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SHM for me making a full two years' worth.


Career: 1x Win -- 2x NW-F -- 2x S-F -- 9x S-HM -- 11x HM -- 7x R
Like me: facebook/AuthorTJKnight

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 3:06 am
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Ramya (Writhmic)
(@writhmic)
Posts: 114
Silver Member
 

@lost_bard Congrats!!!


V39: -- / SHM / SHM / RWC
V40: HM / SHM / SHM / SHM
V41: RWC / HM / SHM / --
V42: -- / SHM / P / WIP

A labor of love: www.starspunlit.org

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 3:14 am
(@cube)
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Well, yet another rejection, number 5 in a row.

Giving up on this contest, as my stuff clearly isn't suitable for this market. Still I think there's nothing wrong with it, and it's better than 90% of published sci-fi on any medium and I'm not willing to change any of it, so bye.

 


 
Posted : August 10, 2022 3:15 am
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Physa/ Guthington/ Amy
(@physa)
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hm , my first one for WOTF!!! woohoo bananarama dancingbanana sunny hearts Thanks so much for those of you who helped sharpen my story. 

Congrats to the RWCs (I know, I know, but it's not nothing), other HMs, SHMs, SFs, Fs, and super congrats to David Hankins @lost_bard for winning third place!!! 

My IOTF entry did not place... 


WOTF results:
Vol 42: Q1 SHM, Q2 SHM, Q3 RWC, Q4 P
running totals to date:
WOTF: 6 Rs, 4 RWCs, 8 HMs, 2 SHMs
IOTF: 4 Rs, 3 HMs
Check out my new website: https://www.amyrwethingtonwriterofspeculativeworlds.com/
According to Winston Churchill, "success is going from failure to failure with enthusiasm"
Somehow I lost my Guthington profile, but it's me. Amy Wethington = Guthington = Physa

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 3:52 am
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(@annax)
Posts: 188
Silver Member
 

Congratulations to everyone, especially @lost_bard Yay! ?


*When one door closes, another one opens. Here’s to a new chapter! Onward!*

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 4:00 am
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