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Morgan
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Gideon just reminded me of another one. This is especially obvious in movies, but I've read it in books also. Every single time a character is running through the woods, especially if they're running from danger, they're gonna trip over something and fall down, likely twisting their ankle in the process or incurring a giant bloody gash. Characters seem to be particularly clumsy running through the woods.


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Posted : February 6, 2026 8:05 am
Dustin Adams
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Unless your me @ 50 seconds:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtX7Xxz_9ao

I literally fell in the woods. Hurt like heck. Giant bruise. 

Otherwise, I totally agree. Clumsy people suck. 


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Posted : February 6, 2026 9:27 am
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Oh. Mah. Gah. What the heck did I just watch?!? You're famous!


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Posted : February 6, 2026 10:19 am
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I think woods are specifically bad for running in. Its more surprising when people don't stumble or run into trees than when they do. So I dislike running through woods scenes for that reason - AND for the fact its never the pursuer that falls over and that the fall always happens at just the 'right moment' for the story beat


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Posted : February 6, 2026 12:56 pm
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Posted by: @morgan-broadhead

@tj_knight 

Oh. Mah. Gah. What the heck did I just watch?!? You're famous!

If you mean blurry, clumsy me, yes. 

That's when I first learned to throw axes! Haha. 

 


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Posted : February 6, 2026 2:42 pm
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