I wanted to share this video, How to Write a Great Sentence. It's worth your time, and I feel it will prove valuable for any aspiring writer. I saw it a while ago and have returned to it several times. It compares the styles of Falkner and Hemming, touches on writing morality, and marvelously demonstrates sentence structure, variation, and sound.
If you're interested in exploring sentence structure, give this video a view. If you're anything like me, you'll be glad you did!
Happy writing!
JT
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thanks JT. I love craft learning recs 
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@gideonpsmith Happy to share!
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