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Todd Jones
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Still working on my story. I can't seem get the ending right. Augh.

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford
2024 - V41 - Q1-RWC (Resubmitted a "HM"), Q2-HM, Q3-RWC, Q4-Submitted (Resubmitted a "RWC")
2023 - V40 - Q1-HM, Q2-HM, Q3-R, Q4-HM
2022 - V39 - Q1-SHM, Q2-HM, Q3-SF, Q4-HM (Resubmitted a "HM")
2021 - V38 - Q4-HM (Resubmitted a "R")
2020 - V37 - Q2-R

 
Posted : June 28, 2024 9:51 am
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Cherrie
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@pdblake A good reason to be late!

Volume 41 Q1 Illustrator Winner!
4x Finalist Illustrators
5x Semi finalist Illustrators
1x HM Illustrators
7x HM Writers
3x SHM Writers
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Posted : June 28, 2024 1:01 pm
Cherrie
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Well, I'm in for Q3. I have a good feeling about this one but that's the way of it most quarters. But this is an extra good feeling, lol. Now to forget about it for a few months.

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4x Finalist Illustrators
5x Semi finalist Illustrators
1x HM Illustrators
7x HM Writers
3x SHM Writers
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Posted : June 28, 2024 1:02 pm
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Posted by: @stricklandia

My first-ever WotF submission.

Hey, congrats. Keep writing! 

 

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Posted : June 29, 2024 3:58 am
K. Z. Richards
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@clfors my first dislike? I feel betrayed lol. 😉

V39:- - - HM
V40:SHM, HM, SHM, HM
V41: HM, SHM, SHM, P

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Posted : June 29, 2024 4:15 am
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Posted by: @clfors

Well, I'm in for Q3. I have a good feeling about this one but that's the way of it most quarters. But this is an extra good feeling, lol. Now to forget about it for a few months.

I keep moving my "good feeling" measuring stick. Usually, right after the results come out for WotF and my hopes sink. My Q2 is my best "good feeling" so far. 

That must mean I'm becoming a better writer?

Good luck to everyone. buddies  

Keep the faith everyone and have fun writing.

typing

 

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford
2024 - V41 - Q1-RWC (Resubmitted a "HM"), Q2-HM, Q3-RWC, Q4-Submitted (Resubmitted a "RWC")
2023 - V40 - Q1-HM, Q2-HM, Q3-R, Q4-HM
2022 - V39 - Q1-SHM, Q2-HM, Q3-SF, Q4-HM (Resubmitted a "HM")
2021 - V38 - Q4-HM (Resubmitted a "R")
2020 - V37 - Q2-R

 
Posted : June 29, 2024 5:08 am
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Cray Dimensional
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Brought scones and coffee over to twitching  table for those last minute stragglers finishing up qtr 3 stories.

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : HM, RWC, R, HM
V41 : RWC, P, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology
"Experimenting with the Dance of Death" in Love is Complicated LUW Romance Anthology.

 
Posted : June 29, 2024 6:33 am
TGio
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Been editing all week, finally figured out a proper ending line yesterday. Now still polishing and proofreading and polishing. Almost there! 

 
Posted : June 29, 2024 7:27 am
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Posted by: @craydimensional

Brought scones and coffee over to twitching  table for those last minute stragglers finishing up qtr 3 stories.

So kind of you. Haven't had time to surface, but it's in now!

I'll pass on the coffee (It's vile nasty black stuff, gets in your mouth and everything.), but now that I'm done, I'll grab five or six scones for nervous energy. Wash them down with some southern sweet tea. Float off to a friend's birthday party on a sugar high.

 

 

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V38 Q3:HM; Q4:HM
V39 Q1:HM; Q2:RWC; Q3:HM; Q4:DQ (oops)
V40 Q1:HM; Q2:RWC; Q3:SF(!); Q4:RWC
V41 Q1:RWC; Q2:HM; Q3:RWC

 
Posted : June 29, 2024 11:39 am
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Posted by: @toddjones

Still working on my story. I can't seem get the ending right. Augh.

 

Go back to your beginning, Todd. The ending is always hiding in the beginning.

 

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Posted : June 29, 2024 2:27 pm
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I did it! First submission in the books! Now I get to work on this other story I have been thinking about! Good luck everyone!

 
Posted : June 29, 2024 3:33 pm
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TGio
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I'm in! Good luck everyone, and anyone still working: you can do it! Smile

Onto new ideas...

 
Posted : June 29, 2024 4:31 pm
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Well, I entered about an hour ago.  I can't say I'm happy with this entry, but I didn't have time to start from scratch... again.

This was one of those stories that was excellent in theory, then got bogged down as I worked through it.  If I could start again, I'd tweak the premises enough that it wouldn't have turned into a nearly 17,000-word monstrosity that still manages to miss the mark.  It needs heavily reworked, and if I resubmit it in the future, it'll look quite different.

Unfortunately, I didn't have time to slap together another story at the end of this quarter like I did last quarter.  That story turned out fairly decent, I think.  A winner?  I don't know, but far better than this one to my mind.

Basically, what happened was this, for anyone who's prone to getting bogged down by life crisis and writer's block:

  • Had an interesting world and idea for a story, but as I worked through it, I realized it lacked an emotional impact and would need reworked.
  • Decided to shelve it and return to the story I originally had in mind for last quarter, but realized it was going to need major rewrites to get it under 17,000 words thanks to massive worlbuilding and too many characters with way too much intrigue and backstory.
  • My cat went missing, and life has been put on hold ever since as I frantically try to get her home.  Nothing else matters now.
  • Got an email saying there was still time to submit.  I hadn't planned on it since my cat decided to fall through a window screen and get lost, but I remembered I had this story.  It was done, but needing a third draft in the worst way, and I'd begun to decide it needed totally reworked.  Unfortunately, there was no time, so I submitted it as is.

I can say I submitted, but I'm not hopeful for this quarter.  I'm glad I did it, though.  I promised myself I would, and I managed to do it.

 
Posted : June 29, 2024 4:51 pm
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Beth Powers
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I'm in for Q3--I submitted before midnight, so that I could enjoy the novelty of not submitting on the last day grinning  

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Posted : June 29, 2024 9:34 pm
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 TimE
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@shounenbat I've struggled with emotional impact before now and probably will again. Such an important factor but not always easy to fit in.

?

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 12:49 am
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Posted by: @wulfmoon

The ending is always hiding in the beginning.

 

Thanks for the encouragement.

 

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford
2024 - V41 - Q1-RWC (Resubmitted a "HM"), Q2-HM, Q3-RWC, Q4-Submitted (Resubmitted a "RWC")
2023 - V40 - Q1-HM, Q2-HM, Q3-R, Q4-HM
2022 - V39 - Q1-SHM, Q2-HM, Q3-SF, Q4-HM (Resubmitted a "HM")
2021 - V38 - Q4-HM (Resubmitted a "R")
2020 - V37 - Q2-R

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 4:37 am
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Posted by: @degray

I did it! First submission in the books! 

It's a big step to write a story, bigger step to finish, and even longer step to submit.

You'll always miss 100% of the shots you don't take.

Congrats on submitting.

 

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford
2024 - V41 - Q1-RWC (Resubmitted a "HM"), Q2-HM, Q3-RWC, Q4-Submitted (Resubmitted a "RWC")
2023 - V40 - Q1-HM, Q2-HM, Q3-R, Q4-HM
2022 - V39 - Q1-SHM, Q2-HM, Q3-SF, Q4-HM (Resubmitted a "HM")
2021 - V38 - Q4-HM (Resubmitted a "R")
2020 - V37 - Q2-R

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 4:40 am
Hannya Kay
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Submitted 🙂 

Last day as usual...

2023 - V40 - Q4 HM
2024 - V41 - Q2 HM - Q3 HM - Q4 P

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 5:44 am
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For all those still writing. "You can so this!" A fresh batch of Donuts and Lattes are on the table. Help yourself.

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : HM, RWC, R, HM
V41 : RWC, P, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology
"Experimenting with the Dance of Death" in Love is Complicated LUW Romance Anthology.

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 7:25 am
Doc Honour
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Posted by: @degray

I did it! First submission in the books! Now I get to work on this other story I have been thinking about! Good luck everyone!

Congrats, Dannie! That's a big deal, just to get one submitted. Think how many wannabe writers are out there who've never even gotten far enough to finish a story, much less submit it!

 

Write so long as words keep flowing...
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FWA RPLA: 2021:Fx2; 2022:1st place Gold, 2023: 1st place Gold novel
V38 Q3:HM; Q4:HM
V39 Q1:HM; Q2:RWC; Q3:HM; Q4:DQ (oops)
V40 Q1:HM; Q2:RWC; Q3:SF(!); Q4:RWC
V41 Q1:RWC; Q2:HM; Q3:RWC

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 7:58 am
Todd Jones
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Posted by: @craydimensional

For all those still writing. "You can so this!" A fresh batch of Donuts and Lattes are on the table. Help yourself.

Thanks, I can use them. {eats one ... two ... three donuts}   

My wife, knowing I've been procrastinating on writing (yes this is my fault - haha), had us go to friends last night for dinner and a movie after I got done with yard work. I planned on writing last night, but noooo. Today, she has friends coming over for a day at the lake. Augh.

Of course, this is all my fault for waiting too long to write.

Double augh.

 

 

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford
2024 - V41 - Q1-RWC (Resubmitted a "HM"), Q2-HM, Q3-RWC, Q4-Submitted (Resubmitted a "RWC")
2023 - V40 - Q1-HM, Q2-HM, Q3-R, Q4-HM
2022 - V39 - Q1-SHM, Q2-HM, Q3-SF, Q4-HM (Resubmitted a "HM")
2021 - V38 - Q4-HM (Resubmitted a "R")
2020 - V37 - Q2-R

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 7:59 am
Cray Dimensional
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@toddjones I hear you on the family activities. You got this.

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : HM, RWC, R, HM
V41 : RWC, P, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology
"Experimenting with the Dance of Death" in Love is Complicated LUW Romance Anthology.

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 8:59 am
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It's been several years since the last time I submitted, but I'm in for this quarter.

sHM x 2, HM x 3, R x 2

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 10:58 am
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Todd Jones
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@craydimensional Thought I had a chance of finishing today, but I guess my wife decided I needed to weed whack, edge, and cut the grass before people came over.

This is a battle husbands know not to fight.  I guess there is always next quarter.

Although, I did think about adding an "11" to my guitar amp to be used during my wife's next work conference call. Then the husband filter kicked in and I locked that thought away. 

soapbox

  

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford
2024 - V41 - Q1-RWC (Resubmitted a "HM"), Q2-HM, Q3-RWC, Q4-Submitted (Resubmitted a "RWC")
2023 - V40 - Q1-HM, Q2-HM, Q3-R, Q4-HM
2022 - V39 - Q1-SHM, Q2-HM, Q3-SF, Q4-HM (Resubmitted a "HM")
2021 - V38 - Q4-HM (Resubmitted a "R")
2020 - V37 - Q2-R

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 11:55 am
Cray Dimensional
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@toddjones Maybe you can find a previous piece you have on shelf?

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : HM, RWC, R, HM
V41 : RWC, P, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
"Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology
"Experimenting with the Dance of Death" in Love is Complicated LUW Romance Anthology.

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 12:20 pm
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Posted by: @toddjones

@craydimensional Thought I had a chance of finishing today, but I guess my wife decided I needed to weed whack, edge, and cut the grass before people came over.

 

 

You must have a better/more mature relationship with your wife than I do with my husband. In my household them'd be fightin' words! fistinair nuclear laughing  

 

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- Dave Farland, Million Dollar Outlines

Writers of the Future:
2024 Q1: F Q2: HM Q3:SHM Q4: P
2023 Q1: RWC Q2: SHM Q3: SHM Q4: R
2022 Q4: R
Submissions to other markets:
2024: 37 submitted 5 acceptances
2023: 74 submitted 13 acceptances
2022: 22 submitted 1 acceptance

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Posted : June 30, 2024 12:24 pm
Michelle J. Diaz
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In for Q3.

V42: ___, ___, ___, ___
V41: HM, Finalist, HM, WIP
V40: HM, HM, RWC, HM
V39: R, R, R, HM
V38: R,

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 3:15 pm
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Prate Gabble
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Submitted for the forty-fourth time.

F x 3

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 3:30 pm
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Posted by: @gideonpsmith

Posted by: @toddjones

@craydimensional Thought I had a chance of finishing today, but I guess my wife decided I needed to weed whack, edge, and cut the grass before people came over.

 

 

You must have a better/more mature relationship with your wife than I do with my husband. In my household them'd be fightin' words! fistinair nuclear laughing  

 

haha

I did get her to kick her friends out just now.  So ... either new story where I don't like the ending or a previous R story, which I have no idea why it was an R.  Seemed like a SHM to me.  But I'm not a slush pile reader so what do I know.

 

 

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford
2024 - V41 - Q1-RWC (Resubmitted a "HM"), Q2-HM, Q3-RWC, Q4-Submitted (Resubmitted a "RWC")
2023 - V40 - Q1-HM, Q2-HM, Q3-R, Q4-HM
2022 - V39 - Q1-SHM, Q2-HM, Q3-SF, Q4-HM (Resubmitted a "HM")
2021 - V38 - Q4-HM (Resubmitted a "R")
2020 - V37 - Q2-R

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 3:57 pm
Eli Jones
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OK, in for Q3. I hadn't written in a long while, so this story was a good 'get back on that horse' submission for me. 

R x 3
HM x 5
SHM x 3
SF X 1
My isfdb page

 
Posted : June 30, 2024 7:54 pm
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